4/29/2004 c6 16Trickster's-Lulaby
Well that was certainly an unexpected way to make him laugh. But somehow it fits. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Well that was certainly an unexpected way to make him laugh. But somehow it fits. Can't wait for the next chapter!
4/29/2004 c6 kinder1
THis is an awesome story and you have to update right now so I can read more adn find out what the heck is going on. How did Rhiann break the spell so fast?
My theory. There was no spell. There families plotted this from since they were really little and are now getting them together. Oh an by the way. I hate IT. I despise It with a passion. IF oyu could maybe put It on Tranquility for a while that would be hilarious. Anyway Update really soon. I can't wait to read more. Please
THis is an awesome story and you have to update right now so I can read more adn find out what the heck is going on. How did Rhiann break the spell so fast?
My theory. There was no spell. There families plotted this from since they were really little and are now getting them together. Oh an by the way. I hate IT. I despise It with a passion. IF oyu could maybe put It on Tranquility for a while that would be hilarious. Anyway Update really soon. I can't wait to read more. Please
4/29/2004 c6 Amber
Wo, i can't wait for the next chapter...dun dun dun. WHAT WILL HAPPEN! Hee Hee ^_^ keep it up. I want many many chapters, this is so funny. Cool
Wo, i can't wait for the next chapter...dun dun dun. WHAT WILL HAPPEN! Hee Hee ^_^ keep it up. I want many many chapters, this is so funny. Cool
4/29/2004 c6 lou
i know i'm whining, i know really and i'm sorry but I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT because that's a truly good story which makes me laugh alone in front of my computer making my family think i'm crazy (well, it's not as if they didn't think so before..)!and just for that you won one of my private awards!please update soon
lou
i know i'm whining, i know really and i'm sorry but I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT because that's a truly good story which makes me laugh alone in front of my computer making my family think i'm crazy (well, it's not as if they didn't think so before..)!and just for that you won one of my private awards!please update soon
lou
4/28/2004 c6 BritNaaaaay
gosh that was hilarious! I was about to cry i was laughing so hard when she was dancing with herself.. funny. ok well please write more.. i also have a thing for dark haired guys with blue eyes so i identify with her. also being hyserically funny myself lol -
gosh that was hilarious! I was about to cry i was laughing so hard when she was dancing with herself.. funny. ok well please write more.. i also have a thing for dark haired guys with blue eyes so i identify with her. also being hyserically funny myself lol -
4/28/2004 c6 14Sinnocently
That was the most creative most wonderful fic I have eer read so far! I congratulate you! You have had me laughing throught the 6 chapters so far! Its hard to make me laugh but the sarcasm and irony and the events just made me burst out with laughter! 10 all the way and I jope to read more!
That was the most creative most wonderful fic I have eer read so far! I congratulate you! You have had me laughing throught the 6 chapters so far! Its hard to make me laugh but the sarcasm and irony and the events just made me burst out with laughter! 10 all the way and I jope to read more!
4/28/2004 c6 StarsignLeo
yay you updated! Yaya I'm not in trouble anymore, stupid school. this is great, hope you don't get sent to iraq. bleh, who would want to live there?
~Mel
yay you updated! Yaya I'm not in trouble anymore, stupid school. this is great, hope you don't get sent to iraq. bleh, who would want to live there?
~Mel
4/28/2004 c6 5aiur
aw this just gets cuter with every chapter! ahem ... rhian is adorable! she's just so, iono ... she cracks me up. i LOVE reading her thoughts, just 'cause she's so like me. heh, scary i know. that was an awesome chapter, and just hilarious. and i don't really think she broke the spell all that fast; i mean, it was hinging there for a long time. she did make him smile at, like, the first meeting. saw it coming! whee! yes, great writing, and NO don't get shipped off! not until you finish writing this, at least. yes, i know, ain't i considerate? =D lol, keep writing!
~k8
aw this just gets cuter with every chapter! ahem ... rhian is adorable! she's just so, iono ... she cracks me up. i LOVE reading her thoughts, just 'cause she's so like me. heh, scary i know. that was an awesome chapter, and just hilarious. and i don't really think she broke the spell all that fast; i mean, it was hinging there for a long time. she did make him smile at, like, the first meeting. saw it coming! whee! yes, great writing, and NO don't get shipped off! not until you finish writing this, at least. yes, i know, ain't i considerate? =D lol, keep writing!
~k8
4/28/2004 c5 shampoOoO
THE STORY IS SO CUTE! and sweet , i read it and loved it ..next chapter please ..keep up your great work
THE STORY IS SO CUTE! and sweet , i read it and loved it ..next chapter please ..keep up your great work
4/28/2004 c5 22Artemis1000
Aw, it's so cute!
And Rhian IS funny! *laughs* Leah, too. I'm looking forward to see more of her. Maybe she can get It off Rhian.
Aw, it's so cute!
And Rhian IS funny! *laughs* Leah, too. I'm looking forward to see more of her. Maybe she can get It off Rhian.
4/27/2004 c1 16Trickster's-Lulaby
No NO NO you musent take it off! That would be a grave injutice to those of us that acctually have a sense of humor! I mean how hard is it to find a hurmorous story with a decent plot line these days! Near impossible I say! And your is even better, because it has a great plot line! And it is humorous to boot! Ah!
Okay I'm done now, just wanted you to know how I felt.
No NO NO you musent take it off! That would be a grave injutice to those of us that acctually have a sense of humor! I mean how hard is it to find a hurmorous story with a decent plot line these days! Near impossible I say! And your is even better, because it has a great plot line! And it is humorous to boot! Ah!
Okay I'm done now, just wanted you to know how I felt.
4/27/2004 c5 49Endowment's Seraph
ha, this is great. I love it, but now, reading this took me so long that my dad is getting mad at me, hell, i'm failing english, i'm mad at me too! But still, it's tuesday, i don't want to study for vocab before i have to. what can i say, i'm a procrastinator.
~Mel
ha, this is great. I love it, but now, reading this took me so long that my dad is getting mad at me, hell, i'm failing english, i'm mad at me too! But still, it's tuesday, i don't want to study for vocab before i have to. what can i say, i'm a procrastinator.
~Mel
4/27/2004 c5 5aiur
haha it's always an awesome use of time, to write. of course, evil school teachers just can't seem to comprehend that their students might have lives outside of school. -_- it's such a difficult concept for them, i swear. ergh makes me so mad. anyways, yeah, great chapter! gavin is SWEET ahaha. i love the guy, hehe. and rhian just gets fresher with each chapter you write. the whole last part of this made me start laughing aloud. usually when people write those scenes where it's all argueing with inner voices and full of denial, it gets a little cliché. the way you approached it was just so funny, and it worked perfectly with your charaters. oh, and by the way, collin's a jerk, heh. i'm sure i don't need to say why. i don't like him. kill him off. =D haha that was merely a suggestion! *innocent look* ... anyways, great writing here; keep it up! and if you have the time, could you do me a favour and check out something i've written? =) 'till next time, then
~k8
haha it's always an awesome use of time, to write. of course, evil school teachers just can't seem to comprehend that their students might have lives outside of school. -_- it's such a difficult concept for them, i swear. ergh makes me so mad. anyways, yeah, great chapter! gavin is SWEET ahaha. i love the guy, hehe. and rhian just gets fresher with each chapter you write. the whole last part of this made me start laughing aloud. usually when people write those scenes where it's all argueing with inner voices and full of denial, it gets a little cliché. the way you approached it was just so funny, and it worked perfectly with your charaters. oh, and by the way, collin's a jerk, heh. i'm sure i don't need to say why. i don't like him. kill him off. =D haha that was merely a suggestion! *innocent look* ... anyways, great writing here; keep it up! and if you have the time, could you do me a favour and check out something i've written? =) 'till next time, then
~k8
4/26/2004 c4 who cares4
this is hella good! u have to update soon. plesae im so addicated! please please!
peace
this is hella good! u have to update soon. plesae im so addicated! please please!
peace