for Princes are Evil4/24/2004 c4 actually literate wierdo
Can you say... CUTE? I love it! Well, the story, not "it" it.
Can you say... CUTE? I love it! Well, the story, not "it" it.
4/23/2004 c4 Deanna
ROTFL! pc! that's a new one! i love Rhian, she's not even trying and doing what she doesn't want to, love the irony! MORE SOON PLEASE!
ROTFL! pc! that's a new one! i love Rhian, she's not even trying and doing what she doesn't want to, love the irony! MORE SOON PLEASE!
4/21/2004 c1 Dookie
Ah, this is really like Ella Enchanted... not that I am trying to say you copied it or anything. Just, the berry spoons, a little reminscent of Char and Ella, and the curtsy thing... I dunno.
Ah, this is really like Ella Enchanted... not that I am trying to say you copied it or anything. Just, the berry spoons, a little reminscent of Char and Ella, and the curtsy thing... I dunno.
4/21/2004 c4 
5aiur
love the denial you make rhian feel! haha i see what's coming here. aw, gavin IS sweet. =) though i found the switch to him feeling emotions a little bit abrupt. there was a good reason for the switch and everything, i just felt you eased into it a little fast. but i really love the developing relationship, and i adore rhian's melodramic personality. it's fresh and really fun to read. kudos to you! great chapters, both of them
~k8
5aiurlove the denial you make rhian feel! haha i see what's coming here. aw, gavin IS sweet. =) though i found the switch to him feeling emotions a little bit abrupt. there was a good reason for the switch and everything, i just felt you eased into it a little fast. but i really love the developing relationship, and i adore rhian's melodramic personality. it's fresh and really fun to read. kudos to you! great chapters, both of them
~k8
4/15/2004 c2 Reminisce
this is a great story. it's something new among all those usual plot story. keep it up!I think there will be more reviews soon.(",)
this is a great story. it's something new among all those usual plot story. keep it up!I think there will be more reviews soon.(",)
4/14/2004 c2 5aiur
oh i love this story! your humour is fresh, and i love everything in the parentheses - it's such a great style of writing, and you use it very effectively. and the whole dancing part and the prince's reaction to rhiannon ... i LOVE it! i think you're gonna get me hooked on this soon, hehe. great job. update asap; you're going on my alert list. and can you do me a favour and check out something i've written? i feel it gives me more of a connection, when it goes both ways. iono ... my dumb opinion. great start, though. =D
~k8
5aiuroh i love this story! your humour is fresh, and i love everything in the parentheses - it's such a great style of writing, and you use it very effectively. and the whole dancing part and the prince's reaction to rhiannon ... i LOVE it! i think you're gonna get me hooked on this soon, hehe. great job. update asap; you're going on my alert list. and can you do me a favour and check out something i've written? i feel it gives me more of a connection, when it goes both ways. iono ... my dumb opinion. great start, though. =D
~k8
4/14/2004 c2 17Erys
Hehehe, I love your story. It's so funny. I really like Rhian - her outlook on all situations is positively hilarious and she has got the coolest parents ever. :)
Update!
~ Faer ~
17ErysHehehe, I love your story. It's so funny. I really like Rhian - her outlook on all situations is positively hilarious and she has got the coolest parents ever. :)
Update!
~ Faer ~
4/14/2004 c2 49Endowment's Seraph
lucky, I had to get up at 7:30 am because I slept in till 11 the day before and my dad is evil. oh well. this is great, I would have had so much fun talking to him, I would've had him smiling by the time I left. not because I'm funny, no, (i am but w/e) but because I tend to make a fool of myself and am so out there, (free spirit here) that he wouldn't have been able to resist laughing at me. I'm that, odd. lol. w/e. write more soon!
~Mel
49Endowment's Seraphlucky, I had to get up at 7:30 am because I slept in till 11 the day before and my dad is evil. oh well. this is great, I would have had so much fun talking to him, I would've had him smiling by the time I left. not because I'm funny, no, (i am but w/e) but because I tend to make a fool of myself and am so out there, (free spirit here) that he wouldn't have been able to resist laughing at me. I'm that, odd. lol. w/e. write more soon!
~Mel
4/14/2004 c1 Deanna
ROTFL! thats hilarious! i love the character's outlook on everything! MORE MORE MORE!
ROTFL! thats hilarious! i love the character's outlook on everything! MORE MORE MORE!
4/13/2004 c1 22Artemis1000
It's a hilarious story! I love Rhian's family already. I hope you'll update soon and that Prince Gavin won't give her such a hard time.
22Artemis1000It's a hilarious story! I love Rhian's family already. I hope you'll update soon and that Prince Gavin won't give her such a hard time.