for Princes are Evil7/2/2013 c1 kissesfromkari
I love your writing style! I just finished this chapter, and I can already tell I chose a good story!
I love your writing style! I just finished this chapter, and I can already tell I chose a good story!
6/25/2013 c7 8ite Chomp Glomp
OMG! I just had (still present though) an idea! Although I won't use it cause people will go all hate on me. Sooooooo... I give you the Idea! It's basically a second "book" to this. Instead though it's Rhian's daughter and Collin's son. They fall in love but Collin won't allow it because Rhian's daughter looks exactly like Rhian herself. Okay... When I read this over, it's not that great. Oh well... I still present to you: The Idea! *cue the trumpets*
OMG! I just had (still present though) an idea! Although I won't use it cause people will go all hate on me. Sooooooo... I give you the Idea! It's basically a second "book" to this. Instead though it's Rhian's daughter and Collin's son. They fall in love but Collin won't allow it because Rhian's daughter looks exactly like Rhian herself. Okay... When I read this over, it's not that great. Oh well... I still present to you: The Idea! *cue the trumpets*
6/25/2013 c4 8ite Chomp Glomp
Rhian: "I hated my charismatic personallity"
Me: "Modest much?"
(Sarcasm intended)
Rhian: "I hated my charismatic personallity"
Me: "Modest much?"
(Sarcasm intended)
5/23/2013 c4 
24-Starry-Night-8
This. Is. So. Funny! I'm readin it close to midnight and i have to be quiet, but I can't stop giggleing. I'd have broken out in laughter if I wasn't mean to be quiet! You're evil and mean, but congrats on a well written piece.
24-Starry-Night-8This. Is. So. Funny! I'm readin it close to midnight and i have to be quiet, but I can't stop giggleing. I'd have broken out in laughter if I wasn't mean to be quiet! You're evil and mean, but congrats on a well written piece.
2/11/2013 c11 Iceleaf
Indiana Jones is afraid of snakes not spiders.
And the original fairy-tales often had had unhappy endings. They were much darker.
Indiana Jones is afraid of snakes not spiders.
And the original fairy-tales often had had unhappy endings. They were much darker.
10/3/2012 c17 2Beautifully Corrupted
I think you should do a lot with the training for queenhood (Is that a word?) and well um make it funny and stuff!
2Beautifully CorruptedI think you should do a lot with the training for queenhood (Is that a word?) and well um make it funny and stuff!
8/18/2012 c8 Hannah
Almost died this chapter from lack of oxygen caused by trying as best as I could to laugh my laughing fits silently.
Almost died this chapter from lack of oxygen caused by trying as best as I could to laugh my laughing fits silently.
7/7/2012 c12 1DormDad
Forget the prince, these two were made for one another! They both talk too much and really have nothing to say.
I have been reading without commenting as I believe that you probably do not revisit this story much after you completed it. Over all, the concept is not bad but the humor eventually falls flat after Rhian becomes a bit boorish. Her flip-flop emotions lose their charm and constant complaining becomes grating on your teeth. I rarely do not finish a story. Unfortunately, this one qualifies. Plot 3 of 10; grammar/spelling 10 of 10; interest to reader 2 of 10.
1DormDadForget the prince, these two were made for one another! They both talk too much and really have nothing to say.
I have been reading without commenting as I believe that you probably do not revisit this story much after you completed it. Over all, the concept is not bad but the humor eventually falls flat after Rhian becomes a bit boorish. Her flip-flop emotions lose their charm and constant complaining becomes grating on your teeth. I rarely do not finish a story. Unfortunately, this one qualifies. Plot 3 of 10; grammar/spelling 10 of 10; interest to reader 2 of 10.
5/8/2012 c18 Branwen Yarden
I love Love LOVE this story! And the title is epic! *giggle* I love Rhian's P.O.V. It must have been fun to write. All the jokes and stray thoughts... Its similar to my thought process... Except... O_o I'm not funny... PC germs remind me of my fear of Prep germs... Gah! Preppy kids and me no mix. Anyway... Amazing job! \(^_^)/
And to show my graditude for your epic work... HAPPY DANCE!
\(^_^)/ (/^_^)/ \(^_^\) \(^_^)/
I love Love LOVE this story! And the title is epic! *giggle* I love Rhian's P.O.V. It must have been fun to write. All the jokes and stray thoughts... Its similar to my thought process... Except... O_o I'm not funny... PC germs remind me of my fear of Prep germs... Gah! Preppy kids and me no mix. Anyway... Amazing job! \(^_^)/
And to show my graditude for your epic work... HAPPY DANCE!
\(^_^)/ (/^_^)/ \(^_^\) \(^_^)/
12/25/2011 c1 5christinaxxyo
This is great! I love the idea of an emotion-less prince and Rhian's personality :) Can't wait to read more
5christinaxxyoThis is great! I love the idea of an emotion-less prince and Rhian's personality :) Can't wait to read more
12/22/2011 c18 ColourCascade
Awww I loved it! It was so cute and funny, and I can't wait to read the sequel! I know I probably had the wierdest look on my face while reading this, cos I was trying not to laugh too loudly the whole time :) Thanks for making me smile hehe
Awww I loved it! It was so cute and funny, and I can't wait to read the sequel! I know I probably had the wierdest look on my face while reading this, cos I was trying not to laugh too loudly the whole time :) Thanks for making me smile hehe
11/23/2011 c18 DayDreamer99
Cute story! I loved the bonus chapter 2. Rhian's such a funny character she makes me crack up. I wonder how shes going 2 be as queen... Guess I hav 2 read the sequel then.
Cute story! I loved the bonus chapter 2. Rhian's such a funny character she makes me crack up. I wonder how shes going 2 be as queen... Guess I hav 2 read the sequel then.
11/22/2011 c18 9ArishaSmile
That was the best story I have read in a VERY long time. I laughed, I nearly cried, I imagined this thing as a major motion picture...Steven Spielberg and no less, I imagine.
I wish I can become as talented as you ^_^
9ArishaSmileThat was the best story I have read in a VERY long time. I laughed, I nearly cried, I imagined this thing as a major motion picture...Steven Spielberg and no less, I imagine.
I wish I can become as talented as you ^_^
9/16/2011 c18 8DorkExpress
I loved the twist! And the last chapter explaining when she made him laugh was cute too.
XOXO
8DorkExpressI loved the twist! And the last chapter explaining when she made him laugh was cute too.
XOXO
8/9/2011 c18 i-wish-i-had-wings
this was sooo weird, and i loved it xD the "silence!"'s still makes me giggle when i think about it =p
this was sooo weird, and i loved it xD the "silence!"'s still makes me giggle when i think about it =p