5/7/2011 c7 Sylven
Cheese, bananas, and pickles. Oh dear. What happened to the shush kabobs of linen in the world?

Leaving her heavily encrypted-with-a-nonexistent-code message,

~Em.

5/7/2011 c5 Sylven
Oh, and yes, Maids are creepy. They had super powers. =3

"And did I just think that? Where was my brain? If you happen to find it, please return it to me. Thanks."

*starts frantically searching, then stops abruptly* Erm... heheh... *awkwardly hides squishy gray lumpy thing behind back* I, um, forgot I had that... I didn't take it! Honest! I hadn't!

...

OK, so I had, but who wouldn't?

Avidly reading,

~Em.

5/7/2011 c2 Sylven
I had been planning on just reviewing at the end of the story. I really had. But... I couldn't help it. Too... many... MENTIONS of evil blue eyes...

I love this story so much. And part of the reason, I guess, is because it's so hilarious. And what else? It sounds almost as though it were narrated by me. 0.0 Yes. I can connect to the character. Easily. I worship you! (Not literally. I'm just complimenting you.)

Those eyes... EVIL BLUE EYES! Again, and again! Sarcasm gall-or! And the way she talked with the prince stick-in-the-mud, just lovely. Wonderful! Ah, such a wonderful story... and, of course, she's completely serious. She's not joking. I rarely joke, and yet I find so much funny. I'd like to take the place of this girl's mom. Just so I can tease Rhian. A lot. Or Rhian. So I can talk to Sir Bob. I am enjoying this story. It feels as though this is a game of pretend I'm playing where I don't switch my personality. It's very well written on top of that, so well that I forgot to mention the writing itself because I was too busy commenting on the story. Thank you. And the first chapter, itself. I read it, and was like, this author's a comedian! ...even though Rhian is... wait a sec. And confused myself. Then I came and started reading it aloud to my little sister. But she wandered away, claiming she was bored. So I pouted. What did SHE know anyway? It was a grat story! ...so I continued reading.

And- wait, living at the castle? I like how she just gives a lot of information, speaking first and thinking later. Or thinking first and thinking later. It seems very typical, these double-takes. And extremely in-character. Yes...

Happily reading,

~Em.

1/18/2011 c1 4Rhiannon G
I like it so far. My name's Rhiannon, though I pronounce it Re-Ann-In, not like how Rhian pronounces it. I think it's kind of funny because everyone pronounces my name like her's is, when I pronounce it like it was in the celtic myth. I just find it ironic and felt I should comment on it. I like it, I was laughing the whole time I was reading this :)

12/12/2010 c5 Charlee Rayne
i'm not sure i like this leah girl... she may b an enemy!

12/12/2010 c1 Charlee Rayne
this is so funny, I'm crying! What a sense of humor she has! You must have for writing it! Lucky, lucky person!

9/25/2010 c18 3Ivymax1234
Mistrel is like Lucinda from Ella Enchanted. I know you said you didn't intend to make this like Ella Enchanted, but Mistrel is really extremely similar to Lucinda, in that she thinks her curse was a blessing.

Anyways, please update Royal Predicament and all your other stories soon.

9/6/2010 c18 4subtly.obvious
oh the funnyness :D

i loved it :)

the part where she got amnesia made me go "gasp! no"

but when she got her memory back i was like " yeah! go old man!"

and the nolan/gavin thing..

yeah youre a good writer. i love your brain. it has a good imagination :)