8/18/2010 c13 Kyre Crow
Sorry I didn't review sooner. I really like this story; all the thoughts and stuff really enhance the story (rather than just telling it. I know I'm making no sense!).
You wanted to know what our favorite characters are? Um, mine is probably Demon/Ahanu. Why? I don't know, maybe because he's one of those characters who are so infuriating to the main character and just make me want to be their friend. (plus, he's awesome) Can I be his friend?
Sorry I didn't review sooner. I really like this story; all the thoughts and stuff really enhance the story (rather than just telling it. I know I'm making no sense!).
You wanted to know what our favorite characters are? Um, mine is probably Demon/Ahanu. Why? I don't know, maybe because he's one of those characters who are so infuriating to the main character and just make me want to be their friend. (plus, he's awesome) Can I be his friend?
6/30/2010 c18 5Chris Rhyanne
You, my friend, are my god of romantic comedy. That was the most hilarious story I have ever read in my life, from beginning to end. Seriously. I bow to your mad writing skilzs. -bows-
I love your style of writing. It's very discriptive without being boring, and reads naturally; it was always funny to see what she was thinking. I live how the humor is always there, but it doesn't stop the serious parts from being serious. I have to wonder if you've ever read the Bartimaeus Trilogy-the writing seems very similar... Well, the parts from Bartimaeus' point of view, anyway.
So, in conclusion, I love you! Keep on writing! And long live sir Bob!
You, my friend, are my god of romantic comedy. That was the most hilarious story I have ever read in my life, from beginning to end. Seriously. I bow to your mad writing skilzs. -bows-
I love your style of writing. It's very discriptive without being boring, and reads naturally; it was always funny to see what she was thinking. I live how the humor is always there, but it doesn't stop the serious parts from being serious. I have to wonder if you've ever read the Bartimaeus Trilogy-the writing seems very similar... Well, the parts from Bartimaeus' point of view, anyway.
So, in conclusion, I love you! Keep on writing! And long live sir Bob!
6/13/2010 c2 AndromedaVenus
I was laughing so hard at that invisible man scene that I couldn't even read properly! It was incredibly funny! You rock!
I was laughing so hard at that invisible man scene that I couldn't even read properly! It was incredibly funny! You rock!
3/11/2010 c17 2Abrasive
I skipped ahead to the end because, well, I couldn't really stomach reading all of it. The narration was... annoying. It was completely random at times, and contrary to popular belief, random isn't funny. Not to me, at least. Furthermore, the protagonist's thought process was convoluted and confusing; I had no idea WHY she did half the things she did. Annoying. And juvenile. It had a few good moments, but on the whole, I didn't like it.
I skipped ahead to the end because, well, I couldn't really stomach reading all of it. The narration was... annoying. It was completely random at times, and contrary to popular belief, random isn't funny. Not to me, at least. Furthermore, the protagonist's thought process was convoluted and confusing; I had no idea WHY she did half the things she did. Annoying. And juvenile. It had a few good moments, but on the whole, I didn't like it.
11/23/2009 c6 PurpleReader29
Demon is awsome! Go horsies!
Demon is awsome! Go horsies!
11/23/2009 c5 PurpleReader29
The rabbits took her brain, stuck on of their on inside to fill the gap, and the rabbit took over her mouth!
The rabbits took her brain, stuck on of their on inside to fill the gap, and the rabbit took over her mouth!
11/23/2009 c4 PurpleReader29
Poke! Poke! Poke! PC's are the worst! Chopping off hand is a very good idea.
LOL all over! This is a great story! Her personality is leaping off the page.
Poke! Poke! Poke! PC's are the worst! Chopping off hand is a very good idea.
LOL all over! This is a great story! Her personality is leaping off the page.
11/22/2009 c18 5eaststar
Wow. I could not put this down. Um... *Squeezes out a critique* Too much losing of one's memory. But maybe you could have had the story of how Gavin lost his memory before how Rhian did and put in a little romantic scene where both of them don't know about their former lives.I really loved this. Plus-some thank yous: sbasiba and tolda raba (russian and hebrew) Great story!
Wow. I could not put this down. Um... *Squeezes out a critique* Too much losing of one's memory. But maybe you could have had the story of how Gavin lost his memory before how Rhian did and put in a little romantic scene where both of them don't know about their former lives.I really loved this. Plus-some thank yous: sbasiba and tolda raba (russian and hebrew) Great story!
9/30/2009 c6 SourTofu
I think i still like KoT more, but this is a cute story in itself and i think i will enjoy reading it until the next installment of KoT!
Much love
jdl
I think i still like KoT more, but this is a cute story in itself and i think i will enjoy reading it until the next installment of KoT!
Much love
jdl
8/15/2009 c1 TasteYourSins
ahhahahah i burst out laughing at the 'sound it out with me' part. =))
ahh...humor.
and i also love dry humor. =))
ahhahahah i burst out laughing at the 'sound it out with me' part. =))
ahh...humor.
and i also love dry humor. =))
7/2/2009 c7 Hannah
Oh oh oh! I want a mind reading horse! :D Aww this chapter is sad... I can just imagine the look of utter confusion on Gavins face.
Oh oh oh! I want a mind reading horse! :D Aww this chapter is sad... I can just imagine the look of utter confusion on Gavins face.
7/2/2009 c5 Hannah
OMG! THIS IS HILARIOUS! I love this story! :D
OMG! THIS IS HILARIOUS! I love this story! :D