3/23/2009 c18 2ILuvBookz
I think the story would be better if you switched the POV of Gavin and Rhian every once in a while, or made another story like this one just in Gavins POV.
I think the story would be better if you switched the POV of Gavin and Rhian every once in a while, or made another story like this one just in Gavins POV.
2/3/2009 c17 2Rome's Daughter
I don't remember...I laughed outloud so many times. The annoying part was Nolan. I didn't like Nolan. I loved Gavin. Why isn't killing It an option?
Oh, that's probably the funniest part, It. I'm laughing even now. Thanks for the laugh! oh, my I can't wait to read the sequel.
I don't remember...I laughed outloud so many times. The annoying part was Nolan. I didn't like Nolan. I loved Gavin. Why isn't killing It an option?
Oh, that's probably the funniest part, It. I'm laughing even now. Thanks for the laugh! oh, my I can't wait to read the sequel.
2/2/2009 c1 Rome's Daughter
Ha, ha, I love her! This is a great great chapter. I love her parents too! You're descriptions (although each set at random times) are so delightful! Going on to next chappie!
Ha, ha, I love her! This is a great great chapter. I love her parents too! You're descriptions (although each set at random times) are so delightful! Going on to next chappie!
1/8/2009 c18 charm en route
Aw. How sweet and random, which are great components for a great story. :D
Sequel time!
Aw. How sweet and random, which are great components for a great story. :D
Sequel time!
12/26/2008 c3 makemebreakme555
i like your story what sorta gets me mad is that Rhian has no reason to hate the Prince. He had done nothing mean to her or hurt her in anyway so why was she saying she hated him so. She needs a reason to be angered by him and for her to avoid him. To be that's rude. Plus she even said so herself, he wasn't arrogant. But other than that your story is great and i can't wait to see what happens at the end.
i like your story what sorta gets me mad is that Rhian has no reason to hate the Prince. He had done nothing mean to her or hurt her in anyway so why was she saying she hated him so. She needs a reason to be angered by him and for her to avoid him. To be that's rude. Plus she even said so herself, he wasn't arrogant. But other than that your story is great and i can't wait to see what happens at the end.
8/18/2008 c9 5Sayacinari
haha, this story is so cute, light-hearted, and funny. it makes the watermelon i am currently eating, sweeter. ;p
haha, this story is so cute, light-hearted, and funny. it makes the watermelon i am currently eating, sweeter. ;p
8/15/2008 c18 4Mealine
Princes Are Evil...The Saga Continues.
Interesting story. Going to look for the sequel now.
Princes Are Evil...The Saga Continues.
Interesting story. Going to look for the sequel now.
6/15/2008 c18 8C.M.F Wright
Straight from the Review Marathon (link in profile!)
I liked the tone of this story, although some of it struck me as a bit long-winded and rambling, and a little juvenile - I think an excess of exclamation marks may be at fault for some of that... As usual, though, awesome characterizations, and highly amusing storyline. Where DO you get your ideas?
I also liked how you gave us Gavin's point of view at the end. It cleared up a lot.
Although I have to disagree with you on one point. Rabbits are adorable! Except killer rabbits, which can be a little nasty.
Straight from the Review Marathon (link in profile!)
I liked the tone of this story, although some of it struck me as a bit long-winded and rambling, and a little juvenile - I think an excess of exclamation marks may be at fault for some of that... As usual, though, awesome characterizations, and highly amusing storyline. Where DO you get your ideas?
I also liked how you gave us Gavin's point of view at the end. It cleared up a lot.
Although I have to disagree with you on one point. Rabbits are adorable! Except killer rabbits, which can be a little nasty.
6/6/2008 c18 ChristianAngel01
I just love tgis story I was laughing at every chapter
I must congradulate you on your masterpeice it is truly one of the funniest things I have ever read
I hope I will read more in the near futrue :D
I just love tgis story I was laughing at every chapter
I must congradulate you on your masterpeice it is truly one of the funniest things I have ever read
I hope I will read more in the near futrue :D