
6/2/2008 c18 Red Rose Petalz
YES. LOVE THE STORY ! Must write sequel... and my fav character would have to be Noland, xD Gavin's a close second. By the way I absolutely adore your voice and how DIFFERNET Rhian's character is...such a nice change. Keep writing..don't stop!
~Red Rose
YES. LOVE THE STORY ! Must write sequel... and my fav character would have to be Noland, xD Gavin's a close second. By the way I absolutely adore your voice and how DIFFERNET Rhian's character is...such a nice change. Keep writing..don't stop!
~Red Rose
5/3/2008 c16 This is not a name
That was so funny, when she was talking about the NTG plan, and she was chucking rocks at him! I starting laughing so hard! Which was kind of bad, because I was drinking mountain dew at the time, so I almost choked myself to death trying not to spew soda on my moniter. My lymph nodes are in pain now. Thanks a lot! (I mean that both sarcastically and sincerely.)
That was so funny, when she was talking about the NTG plan, and she was chucking rocks at him! I starting laughing so hard! Which was kind of bad, because I was drinking mountain dew at the time, so I almost choked myself to death trying not to spew soda on my moniter. My lymph nodes are in pain now. Thanks a lot! (I mean that both sarcastically and sincerely.)
5/3/2008 c13 This is not a name
My favorite character doesn't have a name. Actually, it would be more correct for me to say, "characters". I just love the evil rabbits with their terrifying yellow eyes...
My favorite character doesn't have a name. Actually, it would be more correct for me to say, "characters". I just love the evil rabbits with their terrifying yellow eyes...
5/1/2008 c1 This is not a name
I thought your choice in names was rather funny. My sister's name is Rhiannon, and she is always trying to get people to call her Rhian. When I read that, I just had to show her, and then she laughed. Alot. Because that is kind of coincidental. I'm sorry, I'm not a very good reviewer. This story is awesome, so I will now read the rest of it.
I thought your choice in names was rather funny. My sister's name is Rhiannon, and she is always trying to get people to call her Rhian. When I read that, I just had to show her, and then she laughed. Alot. Because that is kind of coincidental. I'm sorry, I'm not a very good reviewer. This story is awesome, so I will now read the rest of it.
4/29/2008 c2 laughing.through.tears
I love it! Everybody else was staring at me funny, but I loved it! Yay for Sir Bob!
I love it! Everybody else was staring at me funny, but I loved it! Yay for Sir Bob!
4/19/2008 c18
1K.B. and C.B
OMG! I wish I had read this story earlier!
So far, I'm loving all of your stories! Especially OSTSG & KoT!
Don't stop writting! Fictionpress needs writters like you; writters that can actually depict a story without being cliche or making it seem impossible to follow.
I am DEFINETLY reading the sequel! =]
Your biggest fan,
-K.B.

OMG! I wish I had read this story earlier!
So far, I'm loving all of your stories! Especially OSTSG & KoT!
Don't stop writting! Fictionpress needs writters like you; writters that can actually depict a story without being cliche or making it seem impossible to follow.
I am DEFINETLY reading the sequel! =]
Your biggest fan,
-K.B.
3/26/2008 c18 merylin
okay...first things first...i really liked your story, the plot, the characters, everything...there are a few things that i didn't really like...first was her rambling...um...during the times in the story that she was rambling, i kind of lost interest in what she was saying...especially if it was the same thing over and over again...also, the thing about the rabbit...didn't really get why she became so afraid of rabbits...well, that's all really...all in all though, out of ten, i'd probably give this story a 9... :P anyway...hope to read more of your stories! :P
lovelots,
merylin
okay...first things first...i really liked your story, the plot, the characters, everything...there are a few things that i didn't really like...first was her rambling...um...during the times in the story that she was rambling, i kind of lost interest in what she was saying...especially if it was the same thing over and over again...also, the thing about the rabbit...didn't really get why she became so afraid of rabbits...well, that's all really...all in all though, out of ten, i'd probably give this story a 9... :P anyway...hope to read more of your stories! :P
lovelots,
merylin
3/26/2008 c1 merylin
i usually don't comment on the first chapaters when the story is finished, but i just had to say that i was VERY amused...i tried saying the name and i always ended up saying it the wrong way...and i just had to tell you that you use too many words...i get so confused...but i really like the plot of the story... :D
good work!
i will keep on reading now...
lovelots,
merylin
i usually don't comment on the first chapaters when the story is finished, but i just had to say that i was VERY amused...i tried saying the name and i always ended up saying it the wrong way...and i just had to tell you that you use too many words...i get so confused...but i really like the plot of the story... :D
good work!
i will keep on reading now...
lovelots,
merylin
3/11/2008 c18
21rosieroo
ohh! thats so beautiful! well,, I didnt feel sick! this is an awesome story!

ohh! thats so beautiful! well,, I didnt feel sick! this is an awesome story!
2/11/2008 c18
8Adanael
I loved it! There were parts that were totally random, evil rabbits. I must admit it is something i could see riley or i writing like

I loved it! There were parts that were totally random, evil rabbits. I must admit it is something i could see riley or i writing like
1/26/2008 c18 ggg
at times annoying and repetative but over all it was cute.
at times annoying and repetative but over all it was cute.
1/23/2008 c1
7EFaye
hey, I loved this so much!
It was one of the best stories I've ever read!
I would have to say that it is undecidable...my fav character! I love Gavin & Nolan & i love Rhian! :)
Are you obsessed with evil rabbits?
Just wondering...LOL
:)

hey, I loved this so much!
It was one of the best stories I've ever read!
I would have to say that it is undecidable...my fav character! I love Gavin & Nolan & i love Rhian! :)
Are you obsessed with evil rabbits?
Just wondering...LOL
:)
12/20/2007 c18
1Starlight - Crimson Moon
*laughs softly* What an awsome story this was. I'm definately looking forward to the sequal. You should almost write the same story, only from Gavin's point of veiw, that would be funny as well. At anyrate, loved it emensely. Favorite for sure ^-^

*laughs softly* What an awsome story this was. I'm definately looking forward to the sequal. You should almost write the same story, only from Gavin's point of veiw, that would be funny as well. At anyrate, loved it emensely. Favorite for sure ^-^