for SelfFulfilling Prophecy4/9/2004 c1 
12kalariah
Very good diction. I see very few rhyming poems that really sound good, and this is one of them. I really like the line, "It's this tainted task of living/That makes you turn your back". Very descriptive!
12kalariahVery good diction. I see very few rhyming poems that really sound good, and this is one of them. I really like the line, "It's this tainted task of living/That makes you turn your back". Very descriptive!
4/9/2004 c1 28Deluminated
Wow...I really like this. Very nice. It flows well. I shall add it to my favorites.
28DeluminatedWow...I really like this. Very nice. It flows well. I shall add it to my favorites.