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for we are invisible: a variation on the universe

5/29/2004 c1 ICU2
i like the way you wrote this and how it made me feel, I espacially liked this stanza
We are invisible; a kiss to the hollow of my ear
Though it would have been better suited to a sharp
Incision of a flower-ovary (which has no
Voice, what is
Unborn
Has no voice)
Or the tearing of my gloves, settled quietly in your hands.
It makes me think of abortion, which is a very confusing subject
4/12/2004 c1 116Incubabe
I love this... I really do...
4/12/2004 c1 Fate
So, would you mind terribly if I just repeat what I said before?
Other than that, this is somewhat heartbreaking, though I can't pin down exactly why. Just is.
Damn you and your talent. Damn you, I say!
4/10/2004 c1 precious breakdown
cool

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