for Knees Knocking5/19/2004 c1 
21Topaz Waters
Awesome. Again, flawless imagery, and your subtle use of onomatopoeia is highly effective. And this is where I try to stop sounding like my English teacher...This is my favorite poem of yours so far. PLEASE keep writing, for the sake of Thalia, the English language, imagination, and all that is good and poetic in this world! You are absolutely amazing at this.
21Topaz WatersAwesome. Again, flawless imagery, and your subtle use of onomatopoeia is highly effective. And this is where I try to stop sounding like my English teacher...This is my favorite poem of yours so far. PLEASE keep writing, for the sake of Thalia, the English language, imagination, and all that is good and poetic in this world! You are absolutely amazing at this.
4/11/2004 c1 Writer of Darkness
It's great. Sorry-I got tired of saying "beautiful", which is what I should be saying. I think I wore the word out, though. Thanks a lot. (*sarcasticly expressed, of course*). BTW: Sorry about the grammatical mistake in the last poem you reviewed. I always write really fast, and sometimes I screw things up. I also miss things when I proofread. Oh, well, I am, as they say, an absent-minded writer. (Which is ironic because improper grammar annoys me greatly.)
Keep writing.
It's great. Sorry-I got tired of saying "beautiful", which is what I should be saying. I think I wore the word out, though. Thanks a lot. (*sarcasticly expressed, of course*). BTW: Sorry about the grammatical mistake in the last poem you reviewed. I always write really fast, and sometimes I screw things up. I also miss things when I proofread. Oh, well, I am, as they say, an absent-minded writer. (Which is ironic because improper grammar annoys me greatly.)
Keep writing.