for Diane Arbus7/31/2005 c1 
14Juni
Interesting summation of your environment and it's impression on you, great language, too. And Diane Arbus rocks. : D
14JuniInteresting summation of your environment and it's impression on you, great language, too. And Diane Arbus rocks. : D
5/18/2004 c1 156ShadowPharoh
very pretty poem. hehe, maybe a lil to complex for my wall-waling-into brain. lol. thanks for the review, and in your bio it says your vegetarian, hey, me too! and i totally live on tofu and "RICE DREAM" rice-derived ice cream! yummy. ^_^ okay, i'm hungry now! ^_^
~*SHADOW*~
156ShadowPharohvery pretty poem. hehe, maybe a lil to complex for my wall-waling-into brain. lol. thanks for the review, and in your bio it says your vegetarian, hey, me too! and i totally live on tofu and "RICE DREAM" rice-derived ice cream! yummy. ^_^ okay, i'm hungry now! ^_^
~*SHADOW*~
4/11/2004 c1 42Almost Infamous
This really is beautiful. Its full of stark images that stand out really vividly in your mind. I really like the metaphores throughout the piece and the feeling reading this gives you.
The placing of alcoholic at the end seems almost random, yetit makes so much sense with the rest of the poem.
Nice flow.
really, really good job.
I get happy just reading this.
-Bianca
42Almost InfamousThis really is beautiful. Its full of stark images that stand out really vividly in your mind. I really like the metaphores throughout the piece and the feeling reading this gives you.
The placing of alcoholic at the end seems almost random, yetit makes so much sense with the rest of the poem.
Nice flow.
really, really good job.
I get happy just reading this.
-Bianca
4/11/2004 c1 Writer of Darkness
How do you make everything you say so...spiritual? You make everything seem like it's so supernatural, as if it'f floating on a mysterious breeze to places unknown. I like that in a writer, and in a writer's work.
How do you make everything you say so...spiritual? You make everything seem like it's so supernatural, as if it'f floating on a mysterious breeze to places unknown. I like that in a writer, and in a writer's work.