
5/11/2004 c1 michelle s
great poem, i love the emotion behind this.
great poem, i love the emotion behind this.
5/4/2004 c1 Ailis
Wow. This is really intense. I like it better than most of you unhappy poems because it has more spirit in it. There is not just the depressed sadness. There is the loss of something real, something that is one of the only colors of your life. Without Kody, your world would be almost all gray... OK. Stop pshychoanalysis. I don't know really what it's like for you. I'll be quiet now. But good poem, though.
Wow. This is really intense. I like it better than most of you unhappy poems because it has more spirit in it. There is not just the depressed sadness. There is the loss of something real, something that is one of the only colors of your life. Without Kody, your world would be almost all gray... OK. Stop pshychoanalysis. I don't know really what it's like for you. I'll be quiet now. But good poem, though.
5/3/2004 c1 i like coconuts
lovely imagery
lovely imagery