for What Becomes
64/14/2004 c1 Linmenel
Mm..I like it a lot so far. Starting out with the abstract dream really drags the reader into it. And your imagery is beautiful. Not to nit-pick, but just be careful on capitalization and minor grammar errors. But no big deal really, everyone does it.
Nicely done. I look forward to reading more.
Mm..I like it a lot so far. Starting out with the abstract dream really drags the reader into it. And your imagery is beautiful. Not to nit-pick, but just be careful on capitalization and minor grammar errors. But no big deal really, everyone does it.
Nicely done. I look forward to reading more.
4/13/2004 c1 Anon
LOVE it so far.
Trueley awesome.
When Jacob was like "The greenhouse." in chapter 7, I was like "Oh, Swet."
Keep it up and keep writing you awesome awesome writer!
~Growl
LOVE it so far.
Trueley awesome.
When Jacob was like "The greenhouse." in chapter 7, I was like "Oh, Swet."
Keep it up and keep writing you awesome awesome writer!
~Growl