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7/6/2001 c1 9The Jack of Spades
Freaky. A bit repetitive in the beginning...but a good thriller in the making ^^ What would have made it even better was if it was a multi-chapter kind of thing. And the title was so cool - it just said it all, man ^_~
1/17/2001 c1 Sarah
Great story. I like your writing style, the plot about a laser beam killing off people in a company caught my attention. I can't see anything wrong really with the story, athough some people might think that it is weird.

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