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1/5/2006 c1 60dollface and her cancer
The opening of this is very catching. Not the 'first' time I saw you, but the second, like maybe that time was more important. From there.. yeah. The whole poem is lovely. I think you're wrong - this is definitely a work of art.
6/1/2004 c1 31amdespot
This is really different and I like it a lot! I love the way you kind of throw these fragments of memories together and create this certain feeling that I can't describe, that is indescribable. I love it... everything about it... it's kind of sad, in an unrealized kind of way. It makes me wonder about all of it, it evokes the question "Why?" and the last line (as well as the others, really) is great...
4/13/2004 c1 9speal
well, ahh ... yeah. um, if you could just decide to write stuff like this for a living, that would be great. in fact, i'm gonna schedule a meeting with the Bobs about that. yeah. great. ( all classic Lumbergh style from Office Space)
Anyway, I love this, I hink it's really good. For once, Lumbergh has had a good idea. Write this kind of stuff for a living.

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