for Immortality4/13/2004 c1 
28initiative
death is an end.
fantastic. a few spelling mistakes, but this is the first piece i've read since my break from writing- thank you for putting faith in this genre again. perfect story. expressive and describing words and the rain image repeated all the way through. great.
28initiativedeath is an end.
fantastic. a few spelling mistakes, but this is the first piece i've read since my break from writing- thank you for putting faith in this genre again. perfect story. expressive and describing words and the rain image repeated all the way through. great.
4/12/2004 c1 114Wren Craven
wow...very thought provoking...and thoroughly a good read. well done, i quite enjoyed your use of words, especially the wonderful description of the 'deluge'...great job, very classy...check out some of my stuff if you get the chance...
chloe
114Wren Cravenwow...very thought provoking...and thoroughly a good read. well done, i quite enjoyed your use of words, especially the wonderful description of the 'deluge'...great job, very classy...check out some of my stuff if you get the chance...
chloe