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4/25/2004 c1 Jared
Very interesting. I think, if you did some slight editing with the unwanted fragments (NOT the ones you WANT as fragments) and fixed the small number of punctuation/hyphenation errors, it would be really sound.
Then, you should consider advancing it. Make a full plot. Starting from an earlier point is my reccommendation, and then finish later.
You could do a little series, too, of which this is but a part.
Well, it's a good start, certainly. I wish you luck with it!

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