for Final Goodbye7/18/2004 c1 
59Spootasia Tomoe
yes, this poem was on FF.net before poems were kicked off (grr) and i'm just going to repost my review from before, should it encourage others to read:
'that was very sad. i'm very sorry for your friend and i hope nothing like that happens to anyone else you know (or people in general), but it was very beautiful the way you wrote the imagery with the rain and the insence burning helped add to the mood and made it seem very dreary and depressing.
it was beautiful'
59Spootasia Tomoeyes, this poem was on FF.net before poems were kicked off (grr) and i'm just going to repost my review from before, should it encourage others to read:
'that was very sad. i'm very sorry for your friend and i hope nothing like that happens to anyone else you know (or people in general), but it was very beautiful the way you wrote the imagery with the rain and the insence burning helped add to the mood and made it seem very dreary and depressing.
it was beautiful'
6/12/2004 c1 22Just-try'en-to-speak
Hm i think i read this one before was it on FF.net? Maybe i'm wrong who knows but its good though
22Just-try'en-to-speakHm i think i read this one before was it on FF.net? Maybe i'm wrong who knows but its good though