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4/13/2004 c1 20Lise HEARTS Alan
I really liked this story, Tricie. I told u I thought it was ur best. I like how u told a whole story, expressed all this person knows and feels into one page. I told u I liked it gurl! U should write more like this.
4/13/2004 c1 52FAKEromances
ohmygod...that was so sad and so good...almost crying...
4/13/2004 c1 23chocolatecreme06
This was an intersting one shot. It's sad that she ended up jumping. Losing true love is a horrible thing
4/13/2004 c1 31Cindy Moon
Excellent story with the right choice of words to bring out the right type of reaction from the reader. The evident sexual theme really juxtaposed to the "true love" undertone. I love the scene transitions. You put together a lifetime of a character into one scene. Beautiful, especially the ending.
-Cindy Moon *)

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