
6/9/2004 c1 Caitlin
M. candy.
It's all right but the "tastes just fine" looks out of place here.
M. candy.
It's all right but the "tastes just fine" looks out of place here.
6/1/2004 c1
1Moonlight Flower00
I like it! I really, really do. It's discrete but if you have a mature enough mind, you will get it. Keep writing poems! They're awesome!

I like it! I really, really do. It's discrete but if you have a mature enough mind, you will get it. Keep writing poems! They're awesome!