for Take Another HitWatch Me Die4/13/2004 c1 
196Damaged
Sad sad poem ... it's not one of your best, but I loved reading it. Keep it up!
196DamagedSad sad poem ... it's not one of your best, but I loved reading it. Keep it up!
4/13/2004 c1 132Sarah Parker
I like this a lot... i can relate in a way, knowing someone who's into drugs and it kills you to see someone you car about do that to themself... very powerful poem. even though it was your own personal story, the way it was written I felt like it was something I had gone through myself. If that makes sense. In other words, I really felt what you're going through..great job
132Sarah ParkerI like this a lot... i can relate in a way, knowing someone who's into drugs and it kills you to see someone you car about do that to themself... very powerful poem. even though it was your own personal story, the way it was written I felt like it was something I had gone through myself. If that makes sense. In other words, I really felt what you're going through..great job
4/13/2004 c1 70insert name here
wow, thats really powerful... have u shown this to him? i dunno, it just seems liek it might help him understand what he's doing...
~brendz~
70insert name herewow, thats really powerful... have u shown this to him? i dunno, it just seems liek it might help him understand what he's doing...
~brendz~