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8/22/2005 c1 60Lost in A World of Pain
A very deep poem my dear friend. I find myself wondering dark corridors wondering many questions you pose here myself. But I have to ask myself a question, many reviewers asked before, who is it that you want to forgive you? Or is this in a metaphorical sense? I'm not sure. I'm worried about you man. Keep safe.

CheersLost in A World of Pain
1/26/2005 c1 2via-paperclips
yet another amazing poem with amazing imagery. Its interesting how you take your readers on this ride through the words. There is a good sense of motion for this poem. I like how the red roses keep bring me back to a sense of hope. At least you have red roses. Were you forgiven?
6/12/2004 c1 22Just-try'en-to-speak
Your poems really good but like you said depressing it sound somehow like that person was in love maybe *shrugs* well i thought it was really great
5/10/2004 c1 BleedingMemories
That reminds me of something I wrote once... But honestly, I like the way you wrote a lot more. Love reading the stuff you write, especially cause I can relate to most of it... keep it up, so that I have something good to read;)
always...
4/14/2004 c1 59Spootasia Tomoe
that was really good. another wonderful poem. it was very sad and i thought the part about the roses really helped to show how you wanted to be forgiven and to show the love you forgot to show...? that's what i got mostly from it, anyway.
wonderful poem, though, and i'm sure who ever you wrote it for, if anyone this time, forgives you now.
4/14/2004 c1 39Celestial-Sorrow
Great poem man keep em comming.

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