
4/22/2004 c1
148JJR Meerraf
They say that first impressions are the most important. good for you then!
I read tons of poems, but I have to honestly say there was something about yours that blew me away. It flowed so well, and I loved the style, the rhyming, and description. Seriously... blew me away.

They say that first impressions are the most important. good for you then!
I read tons of poems, but I have to honestly say there was something about yours that blew me away. It flowed so well, and I loved the style, the rhyming, and description. Seriously... blew me away.
4/16/2004 c1
57Literary-lycos
Hey thanks for the review. I loved this poem especially the line that says "Pain becomes the addiction" i related alot to it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.

Hey thanks for the review. I loved this poem especially the line that says "Pain becomes the addiction" i related alot to it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.
4/15/2004 c1
81Princess-anna57
Wow! This is good.
Your poem "Green eyes" has inspired me to write a poem about green eyes! :) I just wanted to thank you once again for writing it! :)
-Anna.

Wow! This is good.
Your poem "Green eyes" has inspired me to write a poem about green eyes! :) I just wanted to thank you once again for writing it! :)
-Anna.
4/15/2004 c1
418Amethyst Horizon
awesome poem! it is so incredible! i love the last two lines a lot, but i think my fave line is "Hopelessly wishing on a starless sky"...that just paints such a beautiful image in my mind! great poem- keep it up!

awesome poem! it is so incredible! i love the last two lines a lot, but i think my fave line is "Hopelessly wishing on a starless sky"...that just paints such a beautiful image in my mind! great poem- keep it up!