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5/3/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
i liek teh alternate line thing... great job... i like it
4/22/2004 c1 148JJR Meerraf
They say that first impressions are the most important. good for you then!
I read tons of poems, but I have to honestly say there was something about yours that blew me away. It flowed so well, and I loved the style, the rhyming, and description. Seriously... blew me away.
4/19/2004 c1 miss-peake
that was so good! And very emotional!
4/16/2004 c1 57Literary-lycos
Hey thanks for the review. I loved this poem especially the line that says "Pain becomes the addiction" i related alot to it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.
4/15/2004 c1 81Princess-anna57
Wow! This is good.
Your poem "Green eyes" has inspired me to write a poem about green eyes! :) I just wanted to thank you once again for writing it! :)
4/15/2004 c1 418Amethyst Horizon
awesome poem! it is so incredible! i love the last two lines a lot, but i think my fave line is "Hopelessly wishing on a starless sky"...that just paints such a beautiful image in my mind! great poem- keep it up!
4/14/2004 c1 91unwritten
its good, i dont think there's a person out there that can't relate to this at least a littel bit. nice job, adn thanks for the review

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