for Day at the Beach9/10/2004 c1 
14angel-Janna
that's a good memory and it has some lovely, really vivid description. i especially liked the bit where u were playing with Patty, it was sweet!
keep it up,
Janna
14angel-Jannathat's a good memory and it has some lovely, really vivid description. i especially liked the bit where u were playing with Patty, it was sweet!
keep it up,
Janna
5/28/2004 c1 imconfoosed
That sounded like fun! ^-^ It reminded me of all the times I went to the beach with my aunt, cousins, and brother. We had SO much fun! (sorry...off subject)
Anyway, that was very well written, I enjoyed reading it!
^-^~ Erie
That sounded like fun! ^-^ It reminded me of all the times I went to the beach with my aunt, cousins, and brother. We had SO much fun! (sorry...off subject)
Anyway, that was very well written, I enjoyed reading it!
^-^~ Erie
4/26/2004 c1 Ray
I like how there is lots of descriptions and detail, but if dialogue was included, it would make the story more lively. Keep up the good work.
I like how there is lots of descriptions and detail, but if dialogue was included, it would make the story more lively. Keep up the good work.
4/19/2004 c1 4Liquid Gold
i like it. good memory. i'll be looking for your own werewolf story; i hope you continue to enjoy mine!
4Liquid Goldi like it. good memory. i'll be looking for your own werewolf story; i hope you continue to enjoy mine!