for My Neighbor was a Modern Day Monster2/7/2006 c19 blaze
awesome story.
awesome story.
2/5/2005 c19 Salt and Vinegar Pringles
That was a wonderful and most suspensful story I've read for almost the whole year. I loved how you find out that everyone had actually been changed and .. phew, good read. Excellent.
That was a wonderful and most suspensful story I've read for almost the whole year. I loved how you find out that everyone had actually been changed and .. phew, good read. Excellent.
1/7/2005 c1 
8Katrina G. Cortious
Great story! Hehe... it's supposed to be the last chapter. Eh, nvm!
But yeah. Great story!
8Katrina G. CortiousGreat story! Hehe... it's supposed to be the last chapter. Eh, nvm!
But yeah. Great story!
1/7/2005 c19 Miss-Pirate
wow, i must say that, this story was twisted! lol i loved it! i actually liked jonah i thought he was nice, man was i wrong... hehe good story!
wow, i must say that, this story was twisted! lol i loved it! i actually liked jonah i thought he was nice, man was i wrong... hehe good story!
12/11/2004 c19 9Bleeding Air
Wow. I loved this story! Why hadn't I found it earlier? It's so good, even though I really liked Gabe near the beginning. Near the end, he became a wimp, though. They were still a good couple. I mean, the start was perfect for them, they matched each other perfectly, but then... he just became an ass.
The ending was a little shocking. I mean, a whole community of them? Haha, I thought you'd just end it with them both changing and that was that. Poof, what now? lol.
All in all, I really enjoyed the story. The hints you dropped were really good, and Jonah being a weretyger was neat. Except it was sad that Terra hadn't ended up with either Jonah or Gabe, but there are better men out there, right? lol.
Okay, before I write a novel as a review, I'd just like to say that this story was VERY interesting, I loved the humor you had in here, it was really amusing. I'm off to check out more of your works! I'm adding this to my Favorite Stories list! Ta!
9Bleeding AirWow. I loved this story! Why hadn't I found it earlier? It's so good, even though I really liked Gabe near the beginning. Near the end, he became a wimp, though. They were still a good couple. I mean, the start was perfect for them, they matched each other perfectly, but then... he just became an ass.
The ending was a little shocking. I mean, a whole community of them? Haha, I thought you'd just end it with them both changing and that was that. Poof, what now? lol.
All in all, I really enjoyed the story. The hints you dropped were really good, and Jonah being a weretyger was neat. Except it was sad that Terra hadn't ended up with either Jonah or Gabe, but there are better men out there, right? lol.
Okay, before I write a novel as a review, I'd just like to say that this story was VERY interesting, I loved the humor you had in here, it was really amusing. I'm off to check out more of your works! I'm adding this to my Favorite Stories list! Ta!
11/15/2004 c19 1Frozen-poptart
I loved this! I must admit usually i dont read stuff like this, but your an amazing writer!
1Frozen-poptartI loved this! I must admit usually i dont read stuff like this, but your an amazing writer!
7/21/2004 c19 privateparty
Oh, my goodness! I loved this story so much! At first, Gabe reminded me of my boyfriend, who's name was also Gabe. But man, Gabe was an asshole and Kara was a psychobitch! I loved this story a lot, which I already said that, but yeah, it's a very well-written story! Keep up the good work!
-Emily
Oh, my goodness! I loved this story so much! At first, Gabe reminded me of my boyfriend, who's name was also Gabe. But man, Gabe was an asshole and Kara was a psychobitch! I loved this story a lot, which I already said that, but yeah, it's a very well-written story! Keep up the good work!
-Emily
7/20/2004 c19 75SiriusPolaris
Wow. Just... wow. I'm sad to see it end, but God- it was definately an awesome read. The end had a suprising wrench that was a little cliche but definately a good plot twist. The end comes up and slaps you in the face with immediate assumptions- it's a great teaser.
I loved this fic- I can't wait to read more of your work.
75SiriusPolarisWow. Just... wow. I'm sad to see it end, but God- it was definately an awesome read. The end had a suprising wrench that was a little cliche but definately a good plot twist. The end comes up and slaps you in the face with immediate assumptions- it's a great teaser.
I loved this fic- I can't wait to read more of your work.
7/19/2004 c19 14Kymik
oh, very very cool.
Your writing has a Stephen Kingish sound to it, if you don't mind me saying... not just the subject matter but your style as well.
The story is very fluid and all the pieces fall into place in the end, I liked it a lot. I appreciate the little details you snuck in there as well... like Kara being a "dog-person" and Jonah a "cat-person" and the lost cat sign on the lamp post.
I think if you polished this up, it could make for a very nice short story.
One thing I didn't really understand was the significance of all the dead animals in the basement and their hanging from the ceiling. Then again, I'm not completely familiar with the werewolf genre.
Good job anyways,
cheers :)
14Kymikoh, very very cool.
Your writing has a Stephen Kingish sound to it, if you don't mind me saying... not just the subject matter but your style as well.
The story is very fluid and all the pieces fall into place in the end, I liked it a lot. I appreciate the little details you snuck in there as well... like Kara being a "dog-person" and Jonah a "cat-person" and the lost cat sign on the lamp post.
I think if you polished this up, it could make for a very nice short story.
One thing I didn't really understand was the significance of all the dead animals in the basement and their hanging from the ceiling. Then again, I'm not completely familiar with the werewolf genre.
Good job anyways,
cheers :)
7/18/2004 c19 28Jeremy Stone
wow
just fucking wow
there can be no more said, other then of Andrew's genuis
i saw NONE of that coming, christ.
you fuckin rock dude
28Jeremy Stonewow
just fucking wow
there can be no more said, other then of Andrew's genuis
i saw NONE of that coming, christ.
you fuckin rock dude
7/12/2004 c11 28Jeremy Stone
wow
just bloody wow
I'm a bit skeptical about the whole lesbian fantasies thing, but i really liek how you've developed the characters and made them beleiveable, despite them being far beyond your life experience (or gender experience for that matter))
Altho im still wondering exactly how horror ties into all this, but im excited to see where the story goes
and to be honest, i cant help but see Terra and Gabe's house as yours and their neighbors as your neighbors :-P
28Jeremy Stonewow
just bloody wow
I'm a bit skeptical about the whole lesbian fantasies thing, but i really liek how you've developed the characters and made them beleiveable, despite them being far beyond your life experience (or gender experience for that matter))
Altho im still wondering exactly how horror ties into all this, but im excited to see where the story goes
and to be honest, i cant help but see Terra and Gabe's house as yours and their neighbors as your neighbors :-P
7/6/2004 c8 75SiriusPolaris
"I'm surprised she hasn't eaten my mom..." Hahah! Brilliant.
Anyways, just thought I'd drop a line- I've been a dedicated reader since chapter 3, but since laziness and procrastination are my foremost attributes, here I am, finally reviewing on chapter 8.
This story is so addictive- it's Terra's wit and comfortable manner that make it so easy to slip into. It's almost as if she's having a real conversation with the reader (good choice with the first-person POV. It works wonders for this story). By far, she is one of my most favorite female characters ever.
The chemistry in the fic sizzles. Please, please, please don't leave us poor readers in suspense! Hurry and update!
75SiriusPolaris"I'm surprised she hasn't eaten my mom..." Hahah! Brilliant.
Anyways, just thought I'd drop a line- I've been a dedicated reader since chapter 3, but since laziness and procrastination are my foremost attributes, here I am, finally reviewing on chapter 8.
This story is so addictive- it's Terra's wit and comfortable manner that make it so easy to slip into. It's almost as if she's having a real conversation with the reader (good choice with the first-person POV. It works wonders for this story). By far, she is one of my most favorite female characters ever.
The chemistry in the fic sizzles. Please, please, please don't leave us poor readers in suspense! Hurry and update!
5/25/2004 c2 3angst luvr
I'm hooked after two chapters. This is great! I love storys with characters that are authors, it often helps you know how they think :)
Margaret Mahy's 'The Tricksters' lead character is a young writer, it's fantastic to see all the things we, as authors, go through (the lines that we write and congratulate ourselves on because we think they're great, watching people's reactions to things to give us ideas, trying to understand how every person around us works... it's all in there). It's a very good read and it'll make you wonder about things. For me it's one of those books that you just have to keep picking up, I must have read it at least four times now. If you do read it don't be put off by anything that doesn't make sense or seems a bit angsty; it all comes together in the end.
Sorry.. excuse my rambling. Please update soon! I really like this.
3angst luvrI'm hooked after two chapters. This is great! I love storys with characters that are authors, it often helps you know how they think :)
Margaret Mahy's 'The Tricksters' lead character is a young writer, it's fantastic to see all the things we, as authors, go through (the lines that we write and congratulate ourselves on because we think they're great, watching people's reactions to things to give us ideas, trying to understand how every person around us works... it's all in there). It's a very good read and it'll make you wonder about things. For me it's one of those books that you just have to keep picking up, I must have read it at least four times now. If you do read it don't be put off by anything that doesn't make sense or seems a bit angsty; it all comes together in the end.
Sorry.. excuse my rambling. Please update soon! I really like this.