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3/2/2005 c1 8Written
wonderful. so honest and blunt. and angsty. the words all fit perfectly- nice.
5/23/2004 c1 78LovesLostCat
This poem has a great flow to it, it workds really well, I like it.
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4/16/2004 c1 84Jaclyn
Oh. I like the transition from blaming the "you" in the first stanza to then directing the anger at "myself" (was that clear?).
What a depressing poem. It's funny (well, not really) that feeling something in great depth becomes something *bad* just because it's not matched by the other person. It becomes stifling, your poem says, and since the stifling-ness is inside *your* body...you get angry at yourself for feeling it. Hence, the self-blame. It is so sad though...how love can end up hurting.
4/14/2004 c1 24larna
This is sad, but I like it. You worded it very nicely.

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