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7/21/2005 c3 californiapoppy
This is awesome! I love the concept, and you're an incredible writer. I like Kaydence, she was so funny when she found Jed on her roof! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
3/25/2005 c3 8Kitashi
Please write more! I love your story so far and I would love to see more very soon! Thanks a bunch!^^

~Meilyn
1/13/2005 c3 3morganlafae
Cool story but just a thought...where is CHAPTER 4! I wasn't confused by the whole flashback thing but I didn't make the connection of jed dieing. Now u pointed it out I will be bawling once I know more about him. You barely gave me a chance to love or hate the characters. Need more Chapters. The length is not much and if you are going to update evry couple of months I suggest it would be longer. All in all great story, little mistakes, and alot of anticipation for the next chapter.
8/23/2004 c3 1Wandering Storyspinner
hey! likin how the story is goin. ah! i start school in like 2 days! what the heck? XP yea...so, enjoy the rest of your summer while it's still there. ha! keep goin with this, aight? later!
8/6/2004 c3 6SilentBlueRose
I like this. Well written, and intriguing... I'll be checking back on it, please update soon!
7/28/2004 c2 5Rella DuGrey
Hey, thanks for reviewing my story, now it's your turn! I love this story so far! The way you started in the midst of a little chaos, and then backed up and gave us a little history... it was very cool, and adds a little mystery to your whole storyline! So, all in all, very good. I can't wait to read more.
-Rella
7/26/2004 c2 1Wandering Storyspinner
dude...im confused...was this before she became a singer?
7/26/2004 c2 26girl-23
Ok, well written and good story line, but it's a bit confusing. Like I don't understand why she would have just went right out and told her teacher. Also, at first you said that her best friend Jed had died and then she's just meeting him in the second chapter? I don't understand. Anyway, update soon.
Laura
7/15/2004 c1 susie
is jed dead? im confused because in the first chapter you said so did jed
7/15/2004 c2 8Niccy
Hey, this looks like it has potential to be a really good story. =) Quick question.. around how old is Jaron Sanford supposed to be? Anyway, hope you update again soon. I'd love to read more. ~d.fox
4/19/2004 c1 1Wandering Storyspinner
yo you! how r ya? hehehe...u never told me u wrote another story! y didnt u tell me young lady? lol! well, im seriously lovin this story so far. keep going! lol! anyways..ill ttul! bbai! miss you!
4/19/2004 c1 Rae
Oh mi gosh that was SO cool! I loved it! just a couple comments... Watch her friend's dialogue. In some parts it didn't sound like a teen talking, but an author writing instead. Hmm...i wonder why? Anyhoo! I don't really get why Kay chose her TEACHER to talk to... if you want that part to be believeable, then you should add more background to their relationship. Other than that, this story was FAUBULOUS! I'm glad I finally got around to reading your stories, and it was well worth it. Well, i'm off to Birth Right!
4/15/2004 c1 38Papillon Sierra
that was really good so far... i love it! keep writing it!
4/15/2004 c1 1baby-gurl88
this looks like it will be very good...signed kellyn..who is on the phone with you now and has to say that I know you wont post more for a while...anyways

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