for Hotel California12/17/2007 c2 
2Trippix
Hey, this is great so far. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I figured I'd correct your mistake in this chapter. When the Captain says "We haven't had that spirit here since 1969", "spirit" refers to alcoholic drink. As in they're out of wine. Actually, it's not really a mistake as much as your interpretation of the lyric. That's just how the song was written. Anyroad, It's great so far! *goes to read more*
2TrippixHey, this is great so far. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I figured I'd correct your mistake in this chapter. When the Captain says "We haven't had that spirit here since 1969", "spirit" refers to alcoholic drink. As in they're out of wine. Actually, it's not really a mistake as much as your interpretation of the lyric. That's just how the song was written. Anyroad, It's great so far! *goes to read more*
5/22/2007 c2 jojo
Nice! But it's Mercedes 'Bends' meaning she had curves.
Nice! But it's Mercedes 'Bends' meaning she had curves.
7/10/2005 c4 2Kiley Praylake
This is good, and you were very creative about making the song into a story. I felt like the story went a little too fast though, but good job!
2Kiley PraylakeThis is good, and you were very creative about making the song into a story. I felt like the story went a little too fast though, but good job!
8/18/2004 c4 13Coral Chimera
Interesting, intriguing, gripping. Well written and planned out. Almost scary I must say..but it was enrapturing, very much so.
13Coral ChimeraInteresting, intriguing, gripping. Well written and planned out. Almost scary I must say..but it was enrapturing, very much so.
8/14/2004 c4 shandi
huh. guess i'm not the only one intrigued by this song. it's very thought provoking isn't it. but this story was well done and yes u did justice o the song. i don't know why ppl not reading this.
huh. guess i'm not the only one intrigued by this song. it's very thought provoking isn't it. but this story was well done and yes u did justice o the song. i don't know why ppl not reading this.
8/5/2004 c4 21princess max
This is amazing. I'm so happy, I've had a great day of fp reading and this is just, like, the best one to finish with. You've done a bloody awesome job and I'm hideously jealous!:-)
21princess maxThis is amazing. I'm so happy, I've had a great day of fp reading and this is just, like, the best one to finish with. You've done a bloody awesome job and I'm hideously jealous!:-)
7/20/2004 c4 vintagewhitegloves
Well, i decided to check out one of your stories cause you're like the best reviewer ever :0) and I'm SO freakin glad I did. I've never read anything like this story... it's amazing. I mean, so creative, and original...like... wow, I'm like speachless, it was SO so so good. I wish i could write something like this, you've seriously inspired me to think outside the box. I don't know what it is about it, but it's awesome, it's really shows you that love doesn't have to be all 'my prince has come' Cinderella fairy talke bull, but at the same time, it's not nessecarily a sad ending (thank goodness cause we all know how much i hate those:0) This story is by far, the best story I have ever read on this site, deff. going on my favs. I hope you keep writing, cause I can't wait to read more from you.
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Kisses-Kate
Well, i decided to check out one of your stories cause you're like the best reviewer ever :0) and I'm SO freakin glad I did. I've never read anything like this story... it's amazing. I mean, so creative, and original...like... wow, I'm like speachless, it was SO so so good. I wish i could write something like this, you've seriously inspired me to think outside the box. I don't know what it is about it, but it's awesome, it's really shows you that love doesn't have to be all 'my prince has come' Cinderella fairy talke bull, but at the same time, it's not nessecarily a sad ending (thank goodness cause we all know how much i hate those:0) This story is by far, the best story I have ever read on this site, deff. going on my favs. I hope you keep writing, cause I can't wait to read more from you.
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Kisses-Kate
6/7/2004 c4 Stan
Very well done, the imagery and asthetic appeal of this story rivals most publications I have read in recent time. I think this author has talent and I hope to read more of their works in the future.
Very well done, the imagery and asthetic appeal of this story rivals most publications I have read in recent time. I think this author has talent and I hope to read more of their works in the future.
5/4/2004 c4 11SparkingDiamond
I was listening to this song earlier and thinking to myself, "I wonder if he's updated" and here it is, the final chapter. It was sort of bittersweet when you think about it; Jack fought so hard to get away only to give in and go back. I really liked this story and I can't wait to read more like it. Anyway, great story, as all of your stories are and I can't wait to read more.
11SparkingDiamondI was listening to this song earlier and thinking to myself, "I wonder if he's updated" and here it is, the final chapter. It was sort of bittersweet when you think about it; Jack fought so hard to get away only to give in and go back. I really liked this story and I can't wait to read more like it. Anyway, great story, as all of your stories are and I can't wait to read more.
4/21/2004 c3 SparkingDiamond
Another great chapter; I like how you explored the characters a little bit more, it gives a better feel for the story. Also, I'm honored to have my name in such a wonderful story. I hope I'll get to read more soon.
Another great chapter; I like how you explored the characters a little bit more, it gives a better feel for the story. Also, I'm honored to have my name in such a wonderful story. I hope I'll get to read more soon.
4/20/2004 c1 MetalMistress
This story is AWESOME! I loved it. Keep it up, you're awesome. I loved it. I really did. Nothing bad I can really say. You even spelled things correctly.. ^_~ Go you!
This story is AWESOME! I loved it. Keep it up, you're awesome. I loved it. I really did. Nothing bad I can really say. You even spelled things correctly.. ^_~ Go you!
4/17/2004 c2 SparkingDiamond
Another great chapter. I love the way you've managed to set the scene and make it enchanted and creepy at the same time. I can't wait to read more. Also, will you finally get online? It seems we just can't manage to be online at the same time...oh well, I hope I talk to you soon.
Another great chapter. I love the way you've managed to set the scene and make it enchanted and creepy at the same time. I can't wait to read more. Also, will you finally get online? It seems we just can't manage to be online at the same time...oh well, I hope I talk to you soon.
4/17/2004 c2 5Eagle Seance
Very good so far. would be easier to read if you could space out the paragraphs a bit.i like the balance between dialogue and description. continue!
5Eagle SeanceVery good so far. would be easier to read if you could space out the paragraphs a bit.i like the balance between dialogue and description. continue!
4/16/2004 c1 Reader04
Hey. I really like this story and the creepness that you've tied into it. I hope that you develope the characters some more though. Please continue!
Hey. I really like this story and the creepness that you've tied into it. I hope that you develope the characters some more though. Please continue!
4/15/2004 c1 11SparkingDiamond
As you already know, I really like it so far. The hotel reminds me of "The Shining", only I like The Hotel California much better. It's creepier, yet strangely soothing... Anyways, I really liked it so far.
11SparkingDiamondAs you already know, I really like it so far. The hotel reminds me of "The Shining", only I like The Hotel California much better. It's creepier, yet strangely soothing... Anyways, I really liked it so far.