for Poetry4/14/2006 c6 
1Aryan Shukla
One of the most beautiful poems/songs I've ever read...Have you ever considered turning these beautiful words into music? Maybe you should give that a thought, because the right kind of music will add to, rather than detract from the sheer emotional outbreak of your words.
1Aryan ShuklaOne of the most beautiful poems/songs I've ever read...Have you ever considered turning these beautiful words into music? Maybe you should give that a thought, because the right kind of music will add to, rather than detract from the sheer emotional outbreak of your words.
12/1/2004 c15 Princess Alice
This one is really good, it's scary but I can relate to it and I know people who can. The words portray the emotions perfectly
This one is really good, it's scary but I can relate to it and I know people who can. The words portray the emotions perfectly
12/1/2004 c10 Princess Alice
It doesn't suck. I like it and I really liked the beginning.your faithful reviewer,Allie(And I"m sure I"m annoying too)
It doesn't suck. I like it and I really liked the beginning.your faithful reviewer,Allie(And I"m sure I"m annoying too)
12/1/2004 c2 Princess Alice
"It's all a memoryAnd it never ends like your memory Memories."Your work is really fun to figure out. Great flow and perfect wording.Write for eternity!~Allie~
"It's all a memoryAnd it never ends like your memory Memories."Your work is really fun to figure out. Great flow and perfect wording.Write for eternity!~Allie~
12/1/2004 c1 Princess Alice
Your writing is really creative and it's deep, no matter what it says I can still see it being played on the radio or a cd. Great work!
Your writing is really creative and it's deep, no matter what it says I can still see it being played on the radio or a cd. Great work!
9/9/2004 c16 4Seashah
Yay! Now I will go and bug the friends into reading them. I'll be on the alert for the next chapter of Unfair Odds. Hope you enjoyed your break though, I missed you!
4SeashahYay! Now I will go and bug the friends into reading them. I'll be on the alert for the next chapter of Unfair Odds. Hope you enjoyed your break though, I missed you!
8/6/2004 c14 4Seashah
I've been singing since last night. Against my will. Trust me, I'm in a chior and we have to be on tv tomorrow. And yet, I just HAD to sing this song. It's awesome.
4SeashahI've been singing since last night. Against my will. Trust me, I'm in a chior and we have to be on tv tomorrow. And yet, I just HAD to sing this song. It's awesome.
7/23/2004 c13 GnomeMushroom
wow that's beautiful! really it is ^_^ you're a very very very good writer =]
wow that's beautiful! really it is ^_^ you're a very very very good writer =]
7/23/2004 c13 Seashah
I noticed you've been putting up more songs. It's nice.
I almost started crying when I read this. It's beautiful, and true, and it just touches you. Or at least it touched me. This is one of my favorites of your songs without a doubt. They just keep getting better.
I noticed you've been putting up more songs. It's nice.
I almost started crying when I read this. It's beautiful, and true, and it just touches you. Or at least it touched me. This is one of my favorites of your songs without a doubt. They just keep getting better.
7/23/2004 c13 xmagnoliawine
^-^ My sistah,
I did not think you would right something so..beautiful. Actually, I didn't expect you to right something like this. I suppose it just came out of you huh? XD Anyways keep writing poems/songs, I like to read them! Especially the stories!
^-^ My sistah,
I did not think you would right something so..beautiful. Actually, I didn't expect you to right something like this. I suppose it just came out of you huh? XD Anyways keep writing poems/songs, I like to read them! Especially the stories!
7/22/2004 c12 Seashah
You've written better, I know that. But it's still good. I think I like the third verse the best this time.
You've written better, I know that. But it's still good. I think I like the third verse the best this time.