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2/6/2005 c1 Ivriniel
Beautiful description, very nice choice of words.
2/2/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
i thought i reviewed all u posted. goes to show me how much i know! pft, lol! anyways, i like this. i think it has a lot of potential for a story too, like symbolically obviously. cool! and thanks for all those reviews! they really are appriciated. if u have msn, feel free to add me

until next review which is a poem up from this one, seeya1
9/2/2004 c1 27Proh Crepitus
Yo. What's up? You reviewed my poem which was so sweet of you! ::huggles:: Did you grab your thinmints or did Andy eat them all before you could? You deserve some. ^_^
7/11/2004 c1 53Head or Tales
I like the images I get when I read this- I've always loved sunsets, sunrises and the moon! Short: Fascinated by the sky!
KIX
Ayda
7/6/2004 c1 15Crescent Angel
Wow...Nice. It's a really nice poem. I love it. I always wanted to see the sun rise, but I can't seem to see because of all the houses *sigh* oh well. one day.
7/4/2004 c1 53Desert Roses
You were nice to me, so i'll tell u the truth... THAT WAS SO TOTALLY AWSOME! I loved it! email me:
~:~Desert Roses~:~
5/24/2004 c1 catseyeview
The words are like a paintbrush swirling with colors, very pretty.
4/22/2004 c1 8Rosemarry Underhill
Excellent imagery! Just a suggestion on form: instead of using commas, give the next word or phrase its own line. It adds to the flow and stops is from looking too much like a paragrpah. (I just realized, you could have uploaded it in 'Story Format' and it would have used you commas as punctuation, no line separation. Try uploading in 'Poem Format')
@-Marry
p.s. STILL AWESOME!

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