for To fat to love4/25/2006 c1 
4Bitten by a cow
I am very sorry for you. You have a way with words, and that's pretty cool. Oh, yeah. My brother's a personal trainer, so... ;)
4Bitten by a cowI am very sorry for you. You have a way with words, and that's pretty cool. Oh, yeah. My brother's a personal trainer, so... ;)
2/27/2006 c1 31neubauje
I'm right there with you, I feel exactly the same way. I just keep hoping that maybe I'm exaggerating, and maybe I'll have a chance with someone, somewhere.Nice poem, though!
31neubaujeI'm right there with you, I feel exactly the same way. I just keep hoping that maybe I'm exaggerating, and maybe I'll have a chance with someone, somewhere.Nice poem, though!
2/20/2006 c1 1MorganaXX
I feel the same way. It hurts but i'm glad im not the only one who feels this way. I like it alot it shows the truth.
1MorganaXXI feel the same way. It hurts but i'm glad im not the only one who feels this way. I like it alot it shows the truth.
2/18/2005 c1 63Ponytail Goddess
I understand the feeling completely. Check out my poem "Flab" to see what I mean. Nice work on this one.
-P.G.
63Ponytail GoddessI understand the feeling completely. Check out my poem "Flab" to see what I mean. Nice work on this one.
-P.G.
12/6/2004 c1 1mtmcl
As far as the poem goes, you've obviously conveyed the emotion and caused a reaction from all your reviewers.Thus, you have talent, and talent outweighs appearance.
1mtmclAs far as the poem goes, you've obviously conveyed the emotion and caused a reaction from all your reviewers.Thus, you have talent, and talent outweighs appearance.
8/8/2002 c1 1Untamed Shrew
hi there...this was a sad poem and Im sorry you feel this way but I think (I hope)
I can help you! ^-^ I can go on ALL DAY about this issue but Ill just say whats
is completly neccisary all that matters is you love YOURSELF and YOU find yourself
pretty because if you dont love yourself you cant love anyone else and also
you dont have to be thin to be happy about yourself Im pretty big myself but
I dont get down on myself as long as IM comfortable about it thats what matters
and the same goes for you. and guess what? you have a little "advantage" here
you KNOW the person won't want to spend time with you just because you have
a plastered face then dump you when it disapears this person ((your soulmate ^_~))
will love YOU and who you are. oh and may I add Im 18, never had a boyfriend
and Im in no hurry? thats because good things take time ^-^ ok now Im sorry this
was more of a "lecture" than a review but hey I think it will boost your confidence here
*huggles* love yourself no matter WHAT
1Untamed Shrewhi there...this was a sad poem and Im sorry you feel this way but I think (I hope)
I can help you! ^-^ I can go on ALL DAY about this issue but Ill just say whats
is completly neccisary all that matters is you love YOURSELF and YOU find yourself
pretty because if you dont love yourself you cant love anyone else and also
you dont have to be thin to be happy about yourself Im pretty big myself but
I dont get down on myself as long as IM comfortable about it thats what matters
and the same goes for you. and guess what? you have a little "advantage" here
you KNOW the person won't want to spend time with you just because you have
a plastered face then dump you when it disapears this person ((your soulmate ^_~))
will love YOU and who you are. oh and may I add Im 18, never had a boyfriend
and Im in no hurry? thats because good things take time ^-^ ok now Im sorry this
was more of a "lecture" than a review but hey I think it will boost your confidence here
*huggles* love yourself no matter WHAT
12/31/2000 c1 Hype
Awww..I`m so sorry!:( It`s really not a matter of what *they* think of you, it`s what you think of yourself. Don`t put the blame on yourself for in the end, it will only drag you down. It`s them who will miss out for they will never know the meaning of a true life. If you put this behind you, you will succeed because of what you have learned. By the way, good (but sad) poem:)
Awww..I`m so sorry!:( It`s really not a matter of what *they* think of you, it`s what you think of yourself. Don`t put the blame on yourself for in the end, it will only drag you down. It`s them who will miss out for they will never know the meaning of a true life. If you put this behind you, you will succeed because of what you have learned. By the way, good (but sad) poem:)
12/31/2000 c1 7Loren
Being fat doesn't keep anyone from dating. Everyone has an insecurity (fat, big nose, shortness, ugly, hair, etc). Exercise and fitness is good and all, but you got to realize that you aren't a low, icky person. If this guy made you feel that way, then he's a prick who has probably done this to a lot of people. He's probably insecure about himself, like his stupidity, and feels better by hurting someone else. There's more people in this world then comphrendable and you will find another.
7LorenBeing fat doesn't keep anyone from dating. Everyone has an insecurity (fat, big nose, shortness, ugly, hair, etc). Exercise and fitness is good and all, but you got to realize that you aren't a low, icky person. If this guy made you feel that way, then he's a prick who has probably done this to a lot of people. He's probably insecure about himself, like his stupidity, and feels better by hurting someone else. There's more people in this world then comphrendable and you will find another.
12/31/2000 c1 MilkyWayPen
If he is judging u on how u look, he doesn't deserve someone as great as u! Forget about him! He's a jerk! Ok, i'm supposed to be reviewing, not giving advice, so now i'll review like a good girl. The poem was great, and I'm glad u decided to share it with us! Keep writing!
If he is judging u on how u look, he doesn't deserve someone as great as u! Forget about him! He's a jerk! Ok, i'm supposed to be reviewing, not giving advice, so now i'll review like a good girl. The poem was great, and I'm glad u decided to share it with us! Keep writing!