
12/22/2004 c1
9Kalopsia
this is a very unique poem...i hope you have more like this one (in this kind of format). maybe not...but i thought this was very good ;)

this is a very unique poem...i hope you have more like this one (in this kind of format). maybe not...but i thought this was very good ;)
5/17/2004 c1 catseyeview
I like the set-up of this, esp. the mid-stanzas, "Those things I've heard you say, deny what you've said...etc. It conveys this feeling well...
I like the set-up of this, esp. the mid-stanzas, "Those things I've heard you say, deny what you've said...etc. It conveys this feeling well...
4/17/2004 c1
13hauntingtheliving
I like it alot. I've felt this way alot,too..too many cruel people in the world...Im sorry if someone turned their back on you. Keep up the good work and dun let anyone get you down
-Ace-

I like it alot. I've felt this way alot,too..too many cruel people in the world...Im sorry if someone turned their back on you. Keep up the good work and dun let anyone get you down
-Ace-