4/19/2004 c1 210Kelpylion
Definitely, definitely know what you mean.
Wish this were just a bit longer...but as is, it's quite effective. Maybe you shouldn't mess with something, once it's right.

4/17/2004 c1 368EWindheim
Not sure I really understand the meaning. But even so, it certainly lets the reader know you can't stand being inside.