for Prometheus, Light My Fire8/29/2008 c1 
3PQ
wow these are the types of people I would love to hear more about. I want to know about their fights and making up. I want to see them fall deeper in love everyday. They amaze me in that way. Great Job.. Tab
3PQwow these are the types of people I would love to hear more about. I want to know about their fights and making up. I want to see them fall deeper in love everyday. They amaze me in that way. Great Job.. Tab
9/4/2007 c1 2Lorenz S
Whoa! Is it really possible to make a straight guy become gay just like that? It's hard to say, but I seriously think this is one good piece. Two thumbs up!
2Lorenz SWhoa! Is it really possible to make a straight guy become gay just like that? It's hard to say, but I seriously think this is one good piece. Two thumbs up!
6/11/2007 c1 The Falconer
I like it. Only one thing bothered me:
I thought Alex's quick acceptance of his homosexuality was not really believable, especially since he never mentioned suppressed feelings or urgings in his opening monologue. He did talk about being dissatisfied with his past hetero relationships, but maybe he had not encountered the right woman yet? Surely there are women able to have an intelligent conversation with him?
And then he kisses Locke and "it was like meeting a new friend." That's a lot for a kiss to account for. The only conversation Alex had with Locked was not exactly intellectual...more like small talk.
Sorry, I've a feeling I am not exactly coherent in this review. I guess what I'm trying to say is that this story would be much better if it were longer: you could get into Alex's feelings and personality some more and I would be an insanely happy reader!
I like it. Only one thing bothered me:
I thought Alex's quick acceptance of his homosexuality was not really believable, especially since he never mentioned suppressed feelings or urgings in his opening monologue. He did talk about being dissatisfied with his past hetero relationships, but maybe he had not encountered the right woman yet? Surely there are women able to have an intelligent conversation with him?
And then he kisses Locke and "it was like meeting a new friend." That's a lot for a kiss to account for. The only conversation Alex had with Locked was not exactly intellectual...more like small talk.
Sorry, I've a feeling I am not exactly coherent in this review. I guess what I'm trying to say is that this story would be much better if it were longer: you could get into Alex's feelings and personality some more and I would be an insanely happy reader!
2/10/2005 c1 M L
aw. it's so adorable. The ending is kind of unrealistic. I don't who's going to be that comfortable after such a surprise let alone have anything articulate to say. I really like it otherwise. -grins-
aw. it's so adorable. The ending is kind of unrealistic. I don't who's going to be that comfortable after such a surprise let alone have anything articulate to say. I really like it otherwise. -grins-
2/8/2005 c1 15Callipygian
Man...I love this story. It's so realisticly adorable...I was entertained through all of it for various reasons. The ending was really perfect, maybe that's why you thought it wasn't good. But i liked it, we need happy endings.
15CallipygianMan...I love this story. It's so realisticly adorable...I was entertained through all of it for various reasons. The ending was really perfect, maybe that's why you thought it wasn't good. But i liked it, we need happy endings.
1/5/2005 c1 41Stefen
That was really cute! I love it! Somewhat unlikely, but it's still cute! I love fluff!
41StefenThat was really cute! I love it! Somewhat unlikely, but it's still cute! I love fluff!
8/4/2004 c1 18Val Mora
Aw... *huggles plushie* That's so cute! I don't know if you meant to make some sort of pun with Locke's last name (Locke was the name of a philosopher who believed that people were innately good, I think - yeah, Hobbes was the one who thought they were innately evil, right), but I like it. ^_^ Funess! *huggles plushie some more*
18Val MoraAw... *huggles plushie* That's so cute! I don't know if you meant to make some sort of pun with Locke's last name (Locke was the name of a philosopher who believed that people were innately good, I think - yeah, Hobbes was the one who thought they were innately evil, right), but I like it. ^_^ Funess! *huggles plushie some more*
8/2/2004 c1 19NotEnough
Happy ending! Yay!
I really have nothing constructive to say but it's just, well, i've just finished reading it, and it's so, so very good and i figured that i should TELL you how much i liked it.
So yes, i hope from my blabbering you get that i loved it.
XD.
19NotEnoughHappy ending! Yay!
I really have nothing constructive to say but it's just, well, i've just finished reading it, and it's so, so very good and i figured that i should TELL you how much i liked it.
So yes, i hope from my blabbering you get that i loved it.
XD.
6/8/2004 c1 1D Ryu
‘pretty, perfumed things’… You know, I’ll never get why people put on those things… sometimes that stuff drives animals away! -;
Paragraph 8, ‘the steel *door knob*, he hesitated’. The highlighted word should be: doorknob. I forgot what rule that says why but I just know. -;
Paragraph 12, ‘attention from *to* many’. You know the mistake; I don’t need to point out the correction.
Paragraph 46… at least I think it’s 46. That bit that says: ‘other person moved to *hid* neck, nipping and licking’. That one was obvious even though it caused my brain to jam up and stop working for a minute.
Paragraph 32, from bottom up… again it’s only a ‘I think’ (Cause I have a suspicion I lost count), ‘desk, *me* marveled at’. I’m not even sure if it’s wrong but it made me reread it three times so I just point it out in case you know what’s wrong with it.
[Swirly eyes] I’m so dizzy I forgot what I had in mind about your fic in the first place. I guess if I ever remember what it is, I’ll just email you.
1D Ryu‘pretty, perfumed things’… You know, I’ll never get why people put on those things… sometimes that stuff drives animals away! -;
Paragraph 8, ‘the steel *door knob*, he hesitated’. The highlighted word should be: doorknob. I forgot what rule that says why but I just know. -;
Paragraph 12, ‘attention from *to* many’. You know the mistake; I don’t need to point out the correction.
Paragraph 46… at least I think it’s 46. That bit that says: ‘other person moved to *hid* neck, nipping and licking’. That one was obvious even though it caused my brain to jam up and stop working for a minute.
Paragraph 32, from bottom up… again it’s only a ‘I think’ (Cause I have a suspicion I lost count), ‘desk, *me* marveled at’. I’m not even sure if it’s wrong but it made me reread it three times so I just point it out in case you know what’s wrong with it.
[Swirly eyes] I’m so dizzy I forgot what I had in mind about your fic in the first place. I guess if I ever remember what it is, I’ll just email you.
5/8/2004 c1 86Philip Ellis
Who'da thought that you could mix Greek myth with office romance? I liked the way you managed to weave that into your story, giving it a more classical feel - after all, the Ancient Greeks were the ones who started the whole gay thing, werent they? Nice one.
86Philip EllisWho'da thought that you could mix Greek myth with office romance? I liked the way you managed to weave that into your story, giving it a more classical feel - after all, the Ancient Greeks were the ones who started the whole gay thing, werent they? Nice one.
4/19/2004 c1 Tiane
Sweet! -Oi, this isn't going to be a simple one-shot only, is it? Think of the vast vistas of opportunity opening up! Imagine, the next day might find Alex recanting on his earlier impulse- he strikes one as a methodical chap whose sudden discovered yearning for Daniel Locke deserves more exploration. *grins* Or else maybe it's just me.
Sweet! -Oi, this isn't going to be a simple one-shot only, is it? Think of the vast vistas of opportunity opening up! Imagine, the next day might find Alex recanting on his earlier impulse- he strikes one as a methodical chap whose sudden discovered yearning for Daniel Locke deserves more exploration. *grins* Or else maybe it's just me.