for Empty Letters12/9/2005 c1 
8Dancing4Jesus
Aw, this is such a sad poem! IT holds a sort of forbiding tone in the beginning. Awful, though, that she wouldn't beinformed of his death.
8Dancing4JesusAw, this is such a sad poem! IT holds a sort of forbiding tone in the beginning. Awful, though, that she wouldn't beinformed of his death.
11/22/2005 c1 19Dannen
very poingent (sp?) and was obviously such a relality for so many - i love the way you convey a story yet it still holds all the structurs of poetry =)
19Dannenvery poingent (sp?) and was obviously such a relality for so many - i love the way you convey a story yet it still holds all the structurs of poetry =)
6/7/2005 c1 15Sahara Hayden
This is so sad...=(...I love the way everything rhymed (I can't do that). I love the way you portray her feelings/ love for her Love. The ending was the best, and the saddest part: "With no knowledge at all, she writes letters to the dead". So sad...awesome job!~Sahara~
15Sahara HaydenThis is so sad...=(...I love the way everything rhymed (I can't do that). I love the way you portray her feelings/ love for her Love. The ending was the best, and the saddest part: "With no knowledge at all, she writes letters to the dead". So sad...awesome job!~Sahara~
5/22/2005 c1 6Alkar
really liked it...the last 2 lines were brilliant, haunting...so sad but such a great poem.great job
6Alkarreally liked it...the last 2 lines were brilliant, haunting...so sad but such a great poem.great job
4/20/2004 c1 141FELICIA-SPENCER
Thanks for reviewing my poem. I really liked this. It was sad and heartbreaking, and to think that this has happened to someone out there in the world. It may be even happening now. Such a beautiful poem, and heartbreakingly so. Great job.
141FELICIA-SPENCERThanks for reviewing my poem. I really liked this. It was sad and heartbreaking, and to think that this has happened to someone out there in the world. It may be even happening now. Such a beautiful poem, and heartbreakingly so. Great job.
4/20/2004 c1 194Aslan Israel
How sad. I'm sorry your friend died. That's always hard. good poem though.
194Aslan IsraelHow sad. I'm sorry your friend died. That's always hard. good poem though.
4/20/2004 c1 20Infection
this is a great poem, there is a great rhyme, it's just great.
(thanx for the review:)
20Infectionthis is a great poem, there is a great rhyme, it's just great.
(thanx for the review:)
4/19/2004 c1 82Death-By-Papercut
first of all thanks for the reviews...i like this poem, very well written.
82Death-By-Papercutfirst of all thanks for the reviews...i like this poem, very well written.
4/18/2004 c1 4SilverAndFlames
Wow. This is really good. I love the imagery of the past and present whilst writing from the future. If I make any sense. :S
Thanks a lot for your review it means a lot.
4SilverAndFlamesWow. This is really good. I love the imagery of the past and present whilst writing from the future. If I make any sense. :S
Thanks a lot for your review it means a lot.