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5/30/2004 c1 40twisted little secret
A good piece, slightly confusing, maybe some expansion on what it was they cut from you or such may make it easier to understand. It may be nice to also see some variation on your punctuation, bringing them into the line can give a much better definition to the flow and rhythm and the emotion and feeling beind the piece.
Though it was well written, well crafted.
-nix-
4/18/2004 c1 MyDecember Alex
Wow, Rachel...
*awe* lol. It's so...
When has a writer ever been lost for words? It's wonderful.
Alex
4/18/2004 c1 53Artemis Astralstar
*looks around confusedly* I'm sorry, but i didn't really understand this. I can see the actions, from someone with a purpose behind the cutting, but, i guess you have to be in the sitiation. The poem really expressed the feelings behind it though.

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