for What I Want in a Guy8/6/2012 c7 
2Midnight.raindrops
I don't know what Zac is supposed to look like, but I've been imagining him as Zack from Saved by the Bell. Haha (:
2Midnight.raindropsI don't know what Zac is supposed to look like, but I've been imagining him as Zack from Saved by the Bell. Haha (:
2/24/2012 c11 Mariam
Sunny needs to end up with Zane3
Sunny needs to end up with Zane3
2/23/2012 c1 AmoreJess
I'm sad to see that this story is on permanent hold. :( is there any way to convince you otherwise? Pretty please with a cherry on top? :(
I'm sad to see that this story is on permanent hold. :( is there any way to convince you otherwise? Pretty please with a cherry on top? :(
10/17/2011 c11 11Lucid Lune in Acoustic
I feel like Zac was justified in his anger. Yes, he may have said some very harsh things, particularly those things that had nothing to do with the situation at hand-like her wardrobe, but she brought in on herself for acting the way she does. Reason or not, you don't come to someones home, intrude upon their privacy and expect kindness as a response. She wanted to get a rise out of him, for whatever reason, and she succeeded.
Now I wonder: Why won't this story see the light of day every again? I know it's a bit cliche and by the eleventh chapter the love triangle hasn't actually been established, but why leave it here?
11Lucid Lune in AcousticI feel like Zac was justified in his anger. Yes, he may have said some very harsh things, particularly those things that had nothing to do with the situation at hand-like her wardrobe, but she brought in on herself for acting the way she does. Reason or not, you don't come to someones home, intrude upon their privacy and expect kindness as a response. She wanted to get a rise out of him, for whatever reason, and she succeeded.
Now I wonder: Why won't this story see the light of day every again? I know it's a bit cliche and by the eleventh chapter the love triangle hasn't actually been established, but why leave it here?
10/14/2011 c8 Lucid Lune in Acoustic
I thoroughly enjoyed the dinner scene, it was amazingly done as no characters were left out or felt (to me) out of place. The Carter family, LOL, I just about died when the "sacrifice" line came about! I love it, that's just my sense of humor working for me. The kiss was unexpected but in the best way possible. If he hadn't done it, I would have been silently calling him a Wimp for backing down. I hate when characters pass their proper-angst period. There is only so long a person will agonizingly go over something in their mind before they act on it! So, loved this chapter quite a bit.
I thoroughly enjoyed the dinner scene, it was amazingly done as no characters were left out or felt (to me) out of place. The Carter family, LOL, I just about died when the "sacrifice" line came about! I love it, that's just my sense of humor working for me. The kiss was unexpected but in the best way possible. If he hadn't done it, I would have been silently calling him a Wimp for backing down. I hate when characters pass their proper-angst period. There is only so long a person will agonizingly go over something in their mind before they act on it! So, loved this chapter quite a bit.
10/14/2011 c4 Lucid Lune in Acoustic
It's hard to choose between either of them in this chapter. Zac behaved like an idiot and Zane still hasn't interacted with the character I'd be voting for him to be with. Thus I choose neither at this point in the story. I cannot wait until I get the full description of Zane because Zac is bugging me. I like guys that go after girls they want, even if they're trying to match them with someone else. Once you figure out you have feelings for someone, explore them-no matter what went on beforehand.
It's hard to choose between either of them in this chapter. Zac behaved like an idiot and Zane still hasn't interacted with the character I'd be voting for him to be with. Thus I choose neither at this point in the story. I cannot wait until I get the full description of Zane because Zac is bugging me. I like guys that go after girls they want, even if they're trying to match them with someone else. Once you figure out you have feelings for someone, explore them-no matter what went on beforehand.
10/14/2011 c3 Lucid Lune in Acoustic
I enjoyed the conversation between Zac and Zane. I'm not yet sure who I'd like to see Sunny with. Zac is nice-a little too nice-and he isn't nearly sarcastic enough for me, but he might be just what the doctor ordered in Sunny's case. Plus, she's already feeling some type of way about Zac. Also, aside from a conversation, Zane hasn't been introduced, so, it's anybodies war to win.
I enjoyed the conversation between Zac and Zane. I'm not yet sure who I'd like to see Sunny with. Zac is nice-a little too nice-and he isn't nearly sarcastic enough for me, but he might be just what the doctor ordered in Sunny's case. Plus, she's already feeling some type of way about Zac. Also, aside from a conversation, Zane hasn't been introduced, so, it's anybodies war to win.
10/13/2011 c2 Lucid Lune in Acoustic
"...want to put my poems in You." Lol, sorry, but I had to go there. Popped into my mind and I could not let it fly by. I am enjoying this thus far.
"...want to put my poems in You." Lol, sorry, but I had to go there. Popped into my mind and I could not let it fly by. I am enjoying this thus far.
10/13/2011 c1 Lucid Lune in Acoustic
It is a wee bit weird that he'd ask Sunny what her ideal match is. He hardly knows her, but maybe they've grown close, quick. Her ideal match sounds something like my ideal match-only not. I totally have a thing for blondes. The tattoos and piercings, the charming, bad boy bits, too. I just don't give a care what the wrapper looks like.
It is a wee bit weird that he'd ask Sunny what her ideal match is. He hardly knows her, but maybe they've grown close, quick. Her ideal match sounds something like my ideal match-only not. I totally have a thing for blondes. The tattoos and piercings, the charming, bad boy bits, too. I just don't give a care what the wrapper looks like.
6/23/2011 c11 Reviewer
I don't really see anything special about this story. While yes, the plot is interesting, it needs a little more description and a lot of character development. I'll be looking out for an update though.
I don't really see anything special about this story. While yes, the plot is interesting, it needs a little more description and a lot of character development. I'll be looking out for an update though.
1/3/2011 c9 LovingBlackParadise1
I hope she goes for Zane they are perfect for each other. ...Zane all the way
I hope she goes for Zane they are perfect for each other. ...Zane all the way
11/9/2010 c11 Maddi
Just finished reading your story. You probably get heaps of these, but you have to hurry up and finish it! :D i love your sense of humour and for the poll, I'm going to have to vote zac. even though I dig the whole bad boy thing, zac is so sweet (except that last little episode of his) and he really likes her. Anyway, good job, and keep it up! Xx
Just finished reading your story. You probably get heaps of these, but you have to hurry up and finish it! :D i love your sense of humour and for the poll, I'm going to have to vote zac. even though I dig the whole bad boy thing, zac is so sweet (except that last little episode of his) and he really likes her. Anyway, good job, and keep it up! Xx
11/4/2010 c11 mahi
hey...this is a cool story..Why won't you update..
Honestly,I'm rooting for Zane..I think you are planning something between Chris and Zac..
hey...this is a cool story..Why won't you update..
Honestly,I'm rooting for Zane..I think you are planning something between Chris and Zac..