for when it rains, itshowers?1/25/2005 c1 ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1
To me it's somewhat humourous, great work and very creative! I especially like "shattering of the glass breaking of the dam". They're just very good lines!
To me it's somewhat humourous, great work and very creative! I especially like "shattering of the glass breaking of the dam". They're just very good lines!
5/4/2004 c1 
210Kelpylion
know the feeling...excellent description of shattering glass. (I always was a little *too* fascinated by destructive processes.)
210Kelpylionknow the feeling...excellent description of shattering glass. (I always was a little *too* fascinated by destructive processes.)
5/3/2004 c1 26Sweet Calamity
Awesome. The shower metaphor is great. And the breaking glass. I just ... love it. I can't even pick specific parts to compliment. But "Rinse and repeat" is bitter. I love the whole thing!
26Sweet CalamityAwesome. The shower metaphor is great. And the breaking glass. I just ... love it. I can't even pick specific parts to compliment. But "Rinse and repeat" is bitter. I love the whole thing!
4/23/2004 c1 141Just me.Jessie B
I like the idea of this poem, it is somehow humoring to me. This is really good and will be review every poem and by the way I love Harry Potter.
141Just me.Jessie BI like the idea of this poem, it is somehow humoring to me. This is really good and will be review every poem and by the way I love Harry Potter.
4/19/2004 c1 121Seeker of the Way
WOW! What a great idea! SO unique! I do not know why, but my favorite line is "Temper the pent anger"
I think it should be pen-up, but I like the way it sounds as is. And clever play on words Temper and anger!
Good job!
121Seeker of the WayWOW! What a great idea! SO unique! I do not know why, but my favorite line is "Temper the pent anger"
I think it should be pen-up, but I like the way it sounds as is. And clever play on words Temper and anger!
Good job!
4/18/2004 c1 7spicymulatta
WOW. I really liked this poem a lot. It's a really clever idea that I've never seen done before even in the slightest. Snaps for you for creativity. There's just one line I don't understand: "Temper bent anger." It sounds like you have two nouns there and no verb. Maybe if you rephrased it somehow?
7spicymulattaWOW. I really liked this poem a lot. It's a really clever idea that I've never seen done before even in the slightest. Snaps for you for creativity. There's just one line I don't understand: "Temper bent anger." It sounds like you have two nouns there and no verb. Maybe if you rephrased it somehow?