for Daydreams8/10/2004 c1 jack c. weller
Wonderful imagery in the first half, blending into a dreamy reality. The repetition of the clock line was good i thought. Adds a structure.
Wonderful imagery in the first half, blending into a dreamy reality. The repetition of the clock line was good i thought. Adds a structure.
5/18/2004 c1 
14A. S. LeMay
Oh, the lazy muses. I can relate...
This poem is, how do I describe it? Awesome!
This line right here, "A smoky amethyst held to the light, warm against the palm...", is gorgeous. I really love it.
I really like your style, if you have any constructive criticisms for the stuff I write, I'd really appreaciate it it. Peace.
14A. S. LeMayOh, the lazy muses. I can relate...
This poem is, how do I describe it? Awesome!
This line right here, "A smoky amethyst held to the light, warm against the palm...", is gorgeous. I really love it.
I really like your style, if you have any constructive criticisms for the stuff I write, I'd really appreaciate it it. Peace.
5/16/2004 c1 8MODERNDANCER
hey cool! I like it! Really awesome. "the green and purple scent of flowers in the moonlight, the softest tick of a clock seems so loud" I love it. :) You did use that line about the clock twice, soemthing I wouldnt have done, but still very cool
8MODERNDANCERhey cool! I like it! Really awesome. "the green and purple scent of flowers in the moonlight, the softest tick of a clock seems so loud" I love it. :) You did use that line about the clock twice, soemthing I wouldnt have done, but still very cool
4/19/2004 c1 HideAwayFairy
Whoa, that's so cool. You're right, it doesn't make much sense, but then what dreams do? Keep up the good work.
Whoa, that's so cool. You're right, it doesn't make much sense, but then what dreams do? Keep up the good work.