
11/18/2005 c1
38ScourgeoftheSpanishMain
I love it! Beautiful! I hope you write a hundred more like this. I'd read them and never get tired of them.

I love it! Beautiful! I hope you write a hundred more like this. I'd read them and never get tired of them.
10/15/2005 c1
1The Flyswatter
*sighs* I have to feel symphathetic for Cassandra and her brother. Their lives sound terrible! It ~is~ a bit scary and disturbing. Very thought-provoking piece, and one of the best pieces I've read today.

*sighs* I have to feel symphathetic for Cassandra and her brother. Their lives sound terrible! It ~is~ a bit scary and disturbing. Very thought-provoking piece, and one of the best pieces I've read today.
9/19/2004 c1
49Blayne
how suckfilled. you really built up the sympathy for the main character well, and the hatred for the other characters. this story is really sad.. curse those pretty people for always getting their ways! good job, it gave me something to think about.

how suckfilled. you really built up the sympathy for the main character well, and the hatred for the other characters. this story is really sad.. curse those pretty people for always getting their ways! good job, it gave me something to think about.
4/21/2004 c1
10FireChainsaw
Having been commited myself, I can relate to your character... Interesting story, albeit long. I think once you hit the 50 word mark, its time to break it up into chapters, but, if you can go this long on an installment without a break, more power to you. Good work.

Having been commited myself, I can relate to your character... Interesting story, albeit long. I think once you hit the 50 word mark, its time to break it up into chapters, but, if you can go this long on an installment without a break, more power to you. Good work.