for Left Behind4/1/2005 c1 
190apromptedpoet
You can fly with me whenever you wishNo matter what gender, I welcome you bothI will help you spread your wings whenever you needAnd no matter what people say, please never lose hope!
Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
190apromptedpoetYou can fly with me whenever you wishNo matter what gender, I welcome you bothI will help you spread your wings whenever you needAnd no matter what people say, please never lose hope!
Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
3/22/2005 c1 Valerie Day
very good. you did well to express the emotions of the "valueless girl." all of us girls, I think, feel this at one point or another, and you created that feeling of rememberance.
very good. you did well to express the emotions of the "valueless girl." all of us girls, I think, feel this at one point or another, and you created that feeling of rememberance.
7/8/2004 c1 Haz Almighty
I really like this, it also speaks alot of truth. Keep going
x Haz almighty x
I really like this, it also speaks alot of truth. Keep going
x Haz almighty x
6/2/2004 c1 74RandomGoth
Oh hunni, :'( what a powerful peice of writing that so many of us one feels could relate easily to. Rememeber always you are not alone, there are many others in similar situations who are there for you. Keep smiling.
I love the way you manage to subtly rhyme your poetry so that it is not immediatly obvious but helps the poem to flow, this is a real talent that you use to great effect.
God bless!
Yours in randomness!
RG
74RandomGothOh hunni, :'( what a powerful peice of writing that so many of us one feels could relate easily to. Rememeber always you are not alone, there are many others in similar situations who are there for you. Keep smiling.
I love the way you manage to subtly rhyme your poetry so that it is not immediatly obvious but helps the poem to flow, this is a real talent that you use to great effect.
God bless!
Yours in randomness!
RG