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4/19/2004 c1 39Sakura163
*swears this is the last time she's reading this*
Now that you've reformatted and all that jazz. It makes a lot more sense. I now see what happened and more poinent! Love the rhyme [I can't do it so anyone who can I love! Of course I already loved yah! ;)]
Siting atop a house, death dealer, The Crow
I love the alliteration and how you integrated the crow into the poem! And it reminds me of that movie too! Plus in Native American cultures the Crow was a go between of the spirit world and Earth (well that's like the movie too)
look at me ramble!
I will shut up!
All you need to know is its a great poem!
~Sakura~

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