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7/21/2004 c1 4GalaxyLei
Oh hey, you know what this reminds me of? http:/w.lyricsondemand.com/soundtracks/r/rentlyrics/withoutyoulyrics.html
It's a song from RENT.
5/2/2004 c1 Jennacharm
One of you better works.
But maybe I like it better than others because I like refrains.
And I like repetition.
So I like the repetition of 'Still'
Maybe if you tied the idea of elements instead of the fish in the third stanza it would improve this poem.
- Jennacharm
4/23/2004 c1 20Photophobic13
I love it! I think that we all know the feeling, one time or another. I'm glad that you put this into perspective and did such a great job with it.
~Ph.13
4/21/2004 c1 8buryxmexstanding
Very good! I like it alot... so true! Good job!
~Jo
**Ps. Thanks ever so much for your review... it was a great uplift!**
4/20/2004 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
nice poem!
4/20/2004 c1 Stephen Fierce Publications
Cool poem. It's really good.
P.S Can you review my haiku on "Foxes"?
4/20/2004 c1 29Ethne Lovegood
It sorta gave me the impression that everything though gleaming, gleamed coldy...Nice Poem. Lovely Job! : )

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