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4/29/2004 c1 27Brighty
Haven't reviewed your stuff for a while... Anyhow, if this is the person I'm thinking about, this description is really true to life. Is Max a real person? Never heard of him, anyway. On the positive side: one can see your attitude towards the person you're describing. Something to think about: I know that bookish-style stories are supposed to have long complex sentences, but sometimes it makes the description not more complete, but heavier to digest. Good job. You could include it in one of your stories.

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