for The Fragrance of your Memory5/29/2004 c1 
210Kelpylion
Flows with lovely rhythm and awesome/original images, with a simple-but-consistent overall message. Best simile: 'Like a tiger in a field/ surrounded by dandelions.' Really unusual image, and it worked, too.
210KelpylionFlows with lovely rhythm and awesome/original images, with a simple-but-consistent overall message. Best simile: 'Like a tiger in a field/ surrounded by dandelions.' Really unusual image, and it worked, too.
5/2/2004 c1 Artima Hadanna
I'm glad to see that I'm not the only one who writes poetry in a somewhat random style! I like this a lot, especially the theme you've got going throughout it! Coupla spelling mistakes, but nothing to worry about! Thanks for the review of the 'Invisible Ink' series - it means a lot, and I hope you keep checking back, I know I'll be doing the same!
I'm glad to see that I'm not the only one who writes poetry in a somewhat random style! I like this a lot, especially the theme you've got going throughout it! Coupla spelling mistakes, but nothing to worry about! Thanks for the review of the 'Invisible Ink' series - it means a lot, and I hope you keep checking back, I know I'll be doing the same!
4/30/2004 c1 Kimm
God I luv the language in this one. its fuckyn genious.
God I luv the language in this one. its fuckyn genious.
4/21/2004 c1 28Deluminated
I love this. It's..just great. "Most raindrop" is redundant..because water is wet. But if you'd like to leave it that way, it does say something that adds to the poem. Good job!
28DeluminatedI love this. It's..just great. "Most raindrop" is redundant..because water is wet. But if you'd like to leave it that way, it does say something that adds to the poem. Good job!