for With Flourished Wing6/19/2004 c1 melomusictalk
Your poetry is so good! I wish I had as much talent to write like you!
Your poetry is so good! I wish I had as much talent to write like you!
6/5/2004 c1 
29Hangman
Forgive my ignorance when I ask this, but what is Iambic Pentameter? Or ic-scc? or something? I dont study poetry but if you could answer that in an email Id appreciate it. Now for the poem, I like this one a little less that the others, but thats not saying it isnt good, its still a high standard but I didnt feel as much of an impact. My chair didnt jolt back when I read this one! Its very dark I guess, your poems speak of a lot of wilting and imperfection, I guess thats how you see yourself or someone close? Sounds like another anti-love poem, I dont know, sorry if this is incoherent but my mind is amess right now so Ill shut up: Good work, keep it up.
Cam.
29HangmanForgive my ignorance when I ask this, but what is Iambic Pentameter? Or ic-scc? or something? I dont study poetry but if you could answer that in an email Id appreciate it. Now for the poem, I like this one a little less that the others, but thats not saying it isnt good, its still a high standard but I didnt feel as much of an impact. My chair didnt jolt back when I read this one! Its very dark I guess, your poems speak of a lot of wilting and imperfection, I guess thats how you see yourself or someone close? Sounds like another anti-love poem, I dont know, sorry if this is incoherent but my mind is amess right now so Ill shut up: Good work, keep it up.
Cam.
5/19/2004 c1 47Mac Attack
nice sonnet, Kat. Very descriptive, good word choice. I wish we got to write poetry in out poetry unit. All we did were TP-CASTT's and they were boring as all get out. Well good work here. Claps and Applauds.
47Mac Attacknice sonnet, Kat. Very descriptive, good word choice. I wish we got to write poetry in out poetry unit. All we did were TP-CASTT's and they were boring as all get out. Well good work here. Claps and Applauds.