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11/28/2005 c1 7DudettRin101
Really Kewl.
1/29/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
wow.. I can relate.. very powerful poem
1/29/2005 c1 thisuserhasleft
o.O We share a life. My friends use me all the time. They never call me to talk to me or anything like that, but the minute they need help with homework or studying for a test, who do they call? Me! Then on weekends they all make plans and don't invite me or anything like that and lie to me to get out of things that I've tried to plan with them. And I'm so sick of it. I stopped really talking to them and everything's a lot better. I hope that you do that same thing because it will really make things better for you. And if you already did, then I hope you are much happier.

A rose for you...@-
1/27/2005 c1 190apromptedpoet
Wow. I like this too. I hate it when friends do that. They just act like they're there, but they never are...

You're your only friend.

But then again, sometimes that's not even true.

Anyway..Just a thought. I love this too. One more awesome poem and you're on my faves for sure! ^_^

Much of Love-Suicidal_Greeting
4/23/2004 c1 50Chandra-Moon
I thought this was pretty good. I liked the rhythm u incoorporated, and i liked how it ended with the phrase 'the end.' little things like that amuse me.
I try to give suggestiongs when i submist reviews, but for the type of poem u've written, i dont know what to say, except maybe going back and doing a basic revision just to improve the quality.
I liked this. Keep writing.

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