for Blood of Heaven4/27/2008 c1 
7RenaWrites
Okay... the Caelennai just got like ten times cooler. I love your use of description, like the phrase 'inhuman grace'. It conjures so many images to mind, and all of them evoke the awe and edge of fear you describe...
7RenaWritesOkay... the Caelennai just got like ten times cooler. I love your use of description, like the phrase 'inhuman grace'. It conjures so many images to mind, and all of them evoke the awe and edge of fear you describe...
12/28/2005 c1 18Plinky
Ooh, sounds like a nice beginning. I take it you're not going to continue this. Ah well.
Nice piece of writing!
18PlinkyOoh, sounds like a nice beginning. I take it you're not going to continue this. Ah well.
Nice piece of writing!
9/14/2004 c1 20Mishachan
Whoaah hey why did you stop? This is so intriguing! What do the Caelennai look like? Their descriptions sound like angels to me, except dark angels... I want to know! Curse you and your... stoppage..
20MishachanWhoaah hey why did you stop? This is so intriguing! What do the Caelennai look like? Their descriptions sound like angels to me, except dark angels... I want to know! Curse you and your... stoppage..
5/21/2004 c1 4coldfire247
Very interesting. Ive read it about three times, looking for something that needs work so I didn't just give one of those standard 'keep up the good work' reviews. But I haven't been able to find anything, truly amazing. I hope that one day i'll have this writing thing down as well as you do.
4coldfire247Very interesting. Ive read it about three times, looking for something that needs work so I didn't just give one of those standard 'keep up the good work' reviews. But I haven't been able to find anything, truly amazing. I hope that one day i'll have this writing thing down as well as you do.
5/17/2004 c1 kel rana
My goodness, I adore your writing style. It just flows, is engaging and captivating. This story sounds like a pearler. I hope you continue. I'd like to know if those Caelennai that are bound to 'dark' animals are 'darker'-natured than those Caelennai bound to 'light' animals. Is there contention amongst the perfect creatures?
My goodness, I adore your writing style. It just flows, is engaging and captivating. This story sounds like a pearler. I hope you continue. I'd like to know if those Caelennai that are bound to 'dark' animals are 'darker'-natured than those Caelennai bound to 'light' animals. Is there contention amongst the perfect creatures?
4/26/2004 c1 36Windsong
Shimoyo! *hugs* I haven't talked to you for AGES! I keep trying to email you but it keeps coming back to me saying that your email doesn't exist. *kicks her email provider* Really interesting idea, and beautiful language - as usual. How could I expect anything less from you? *grins* I'm so glad you started posting again! I missed your pretty writing style. It's funny, but I definitely hear echoes with Featherdust's back story - then again, that's just because I'm so wrapped up in that story I think of nearly everything in Featherdust terms. I eagerly look forward to what you're going to do with this. Please keep writing! -Windsong ^_^
36WindsongShimoyo! *hugs* I haven't talked to you for AGES! I keep trying to email you but it keeps coming back to me saying that your email doesn't exist. *kicks her email provider* Really interesting idea, and beautiful language - as usual. How could I expect anything less from you? *grins* I'm so glad you started posting again! I missed your pretty writing style. It's funny, but I definitely hear echoes with Featherdust's back story - then again, that's just because I'm so wrapped up in that story I think of nearly everything in Featherdust terms. I eagerly look forward to what you're going to do with this. Please keep writing! -Windsong ^_^
4/24/2004 c1 3Ahrihliir
Hey, how's it going? This sounds very interesting. I hope you write more, because I think it would make a very good story! I love the way you write. It's so descriptive and flowing and...and...PRETTY! So write more, k? Bye for now!
3AhrihliirHey, how's it going? This sounds very interesting. I hope you write more, because I think it would make a very good story! I love the way you write. It's so descriptive and flowing and...and...PRETTY! So write more, k? Bye for now!
4/23/2004 c1 1Elimarion Rhunholf
Good start...good start. This will definitly be an interesting story when it starts going. There isn't really much to critique here...the detail is good, plots good so far, and the spelling and choice of words is great. You could make a really good story out of it, and I'd love to read it. Keep it up!
1Elimarion RhunholfGood start...good start. This will definitly be an interesting story when it starts going. There isn't really much to critique here...the detail is good, plots good so far, and the spelling and choice of words is great. You could make a really good story out of it, and I'd love to read it. Keep it up!