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12/28/2005 c1 3Lasrina
I must agree with you on the gym thing lolExcellent poem
5/10/2005 c1 105Chaloux
this is certainly very personal. my hell comes from inside of me.
9/2/2004 c1 20Mayhem6779
Gee... It seems a lot like here!
5/25/2003 c1 126swift sky silver
that's great imagery=)
5/14/2002 c1 21De Miles Justus
Interesting point of view. Archtypal, but you write it well enough so it doesn't get boring.

You describe it existentially...I'd have enjoyed it so much more if it were to a greater degree.

Hell is other people - Jean-Paul Sarte

Abandon all hope, ye who enter here - Dante's Inferno

Long is the way...and hard, that out of Hell leads up to light - Paradise Lost
3/16/2002 c1 1Prophetess Sapphire
Also, in Hell, everything bad you did to hurt someone else you feel. As much heartbreak and swims you take in the Lake Of Fire, you never die...
8/9/2001 c1 6SoleilBleu
Good Job.
1/19/2001 c1 Wooooooooooooodie
good. i like the part when ya said "ur butt gets burned by fire". jk!

c-ya!
1/2/2001 c1 whoopdido
so true u

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