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7/20/2004 c1 16RuathaWehrling
Hey there, Jade!
Well, I'm a bookoholic myself, so I'm definitely with you on the matter of this poem! :) I especially liked the first line.
However, you should really take a look at the rhythm of it. Your lines consist of anywhere between 5 and 8 syllables, randomly, which is way too much variety for such a short poem. Try to read through it in cadence, and figure out where to add or subtract words to make it flow better.
Take care!

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